Demolition Lovers

Hi everyone this is my first MMO blog, so please be patient

This tale begins when i climbed down the vertical cliff in El Nath, I decided to continue my training
when i saw a archer girl shaking in the snow. When i saw her i said to myself “I cant possibly leave her
there, she is freezing”, being an hunter I knew that she would slowly die in this cold, I lifted her into my arms
and continued to carry her to my warm cabin.
When we were already far from that place I noticed her respiration was fading so i took off my
dark napoleon and cover her with the warm cape, the girl quickly recovered some color in her face
as I walked through the snowy path i heard two level 45 sins were following us. They were clearly
waiting for me to fall and pass out, of course they thought that becuase my napoleon was off as well
as my lynex, everything you could see from that distance was a blurry silouhette* of a bow.
I heard the characteristic sound of haste, in that moment i knew there were going to attack..
as quickly as could I hid the girl and grabbed my Hinkel seconds later i saw a tobi flying at me
with a very odd speed, when i saw that i knew that the assasin was not very experienced.
I grabbed a few iron arrows and shot them at great speed i could see that the arrow pierced
the hand of the first assasin I could also hear the screams of pain, the blood was visible in that
distance. I heard him yelled ” I’ll that girl even if it takes my life in the process, hear my words
Aspen”…
I quickly ask the girl : Are you Aspen?, she answered with a weak “yes”.
From that moment i understand that she was not a weak girl at all, she was only gravely injured
I was shocked that she looked so innocent but as I got closer to her a faint smell of blood covered
her body, the discreet smell was familiar since I have been involved in many killings before.
As i got rid of both of the assasin i proceed to move their corpses out of sight we continued our
journey when we finally reach my cabin I left her sleeping in the large sofa near the kitchen,
when i prepared to cook something to eat for the both of us. i noticed i was out of things that could
replace the hp she lost so i quickly left the cabin to find some meat and wine.
When i got back from the store i noticed she was not there. I feared that some of those assasins friends would come for her, but as i searched the house i saw a letter in crimson paper and a black seal there the
ink handwriting inscribed the following text.
” To the gentle ranger with a particular smell
of death.
May new begginings and stollen sweet hearts
mark this day…
Would you be so kind to drink a glass of wine
with me in Orbis when you get back”

Sincerly, Aspen

15 thoughts on “Demolition Lovers”

  1. Um, Isn’t Demolition Lovers a My Chemical Romance song? <<;;

    Good ideas, but it could use some improvement.

  2. if you would be so handy use a gamma checker ideas are good but gamma is bad (thurst me i dont look at gamma really but most people do)
    I noticed this when i started writing my own story

  3. thank you for your comments, all comments are very helpful.
    and yes Demolition Lovers is a Mcr song, i thought it will make a good title

  4. I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
    This is a great first story, i mean the elegant argument and the aspen’s letter JUST BRILLIANT

  5. This may be the beggining of a great mmo writer, keep it up
    and WOW thats one meaningful letter, how do you say so much with such a little word quantity?

  6. Thanks, I’ll try to polish some of the mistakes and hopefully if anyone wants this tale to continue please say it
    and I promise I will do my best to deliver it as soon as I can

  7. hi its me again i have to say something XD
    I bet that the girl that wrote the story ” Female warriors Ch.1″ would certanly be good friends if you met <3

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