The Beginning!Number lord in the world!

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The story is about-MilleniumIX:my Character from my story that…long story.(but his real name is:Halloween,MilleniumIX its only the name of his trans(from my story))
Everything began when he came to victoria island,reached lvl 10 began a thief and began to kill the monsters to get the honor of assasin.

TBC(i dont have power to write more-_-“)

5 thoughts on “The Beginning!Number lord in the world!”

  2. HIIIIIIIIIII .

    WELCOME TO MMOTALES .

    Don’t get involved in any flame wars .
    [Advice by Dest1, I suppose .]

    Talk about MMO-Related stuff .

    Don’t Spam .
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    Blog about MMO-related stuff .

    Be nice <3

    And I dare you to post crude comments, or ones that are classified under ‘heartless’ .

    Don’t talk 1337 .

    Type properly, legibly, don’t use short forms too often, and use paragraphs <3

    Don’t rant about hackers; we’ve had enough of blogs debating whether hackers are [*Negatives*] or not.

    Don’t make popularity blogs .

    Read the rules if in any doubt .

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    Do not start a flame war . Doing any of the above can cause one. If you dislike someone of MMOT, don’t say it. Just ignore the person.

    Anything irrelevant to MMO can go in Profil3 <3

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    Try it .

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    And not poisoned .

    -Tries to hide poison bottle behind back-
    –

    And about your story –

    You could have included descriptions .

    You shouldn’t just say:

    He trained hard . He got to level 10 . He went to kerning to be the greatest thief ever . He was so proud . He trained a lot . He reached level 70 . He became a hermit . He saw a girl . He fell in love with her . They married and lived happily ever after .

    >>;

    Too many clichĂ©s aren’t completely welcomed either .

  3. After periods and commas, use that biglongblankbaratthebottomofyourkeyboard.

    And try not to include “levels” in fanfics.
    I mean, you don’t just go up to a person in real life and say, “Hi, I’m level 13.”
    There are a few typoes, and don’t use cliches, as Anni said.
    “Hi. My name is Bob. My parents died when I was born. I are level 10. I are now level 100000. I are use the cool weapon. I find girl. Me like her”
    Things like those are usually ignored.
    Type literately, use fresh ideas.
    And listen to Annikabelle.

  4. LunarPanda said: “After periods and commas, use that biglongblankbaratthebottomofyourkeyboard.

    And try not to include “levels” in fanfics.
    I mean, you don’t just go up to a person in real life and say, “Hi, I’m level 13.”
    There are a few typoes, and don’t use cliches, as Anni said.
    “Hi. My name is Bob. My parents died when I was born. I are level 10. I are now level 100000. I are use the cool weapon. I find girl. Me like her”
    Things like those are usually ignored.
    Type literately, use fresh ideas.
    And listen to Annikabelle.”

    illiterateness is only permitted when speaking of apples, oranges, pies, or other fruits or deserts
    Example: I are wanting of pie
    Yummy!

    ~Guy of Die

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