I finshed it off. Please read the rest :]
Ever since the people of the world called Maple found out about Zakum, a tournament was held in place to see who can face this evil creature. Grendel and some of his most talented students studied Zakum and was said that he would rise in 2 years. In 2 years the ultimate battle between monster and humans will happen.
RIIINNGG!!! Aaron woke up suddenly from the loud ringing of his alarm clock and fell off his bad by accident.
“I really hate when that happens.” Aaron mumbled to himself half asleep. Aaron was a chief bandit age of 14 and lived by himself. Ever since his parents died from the crimson barlog on their way to Orbis aaron went to the dark lord for help.
Aaron got up and went into the kitchen to get a bowl of cereal. Little did he know what he was going to see. On the table where he eats in the kitchen he sees a piece of paper with some writing on it.
“Dear Aaron,
This is an invintation to a world wide tournament thats going to be held in Orbis. Bring a team of 4 including yourself. The tournament will be held 2 weeks from now. Winner of the tournament gets the grand prize of 5 billion mesos. Fill in the sheet attached onto this piece of paper and Mail it to the potion shop in orbis.
From, The Dark lord.”
On the sheet that the invintation was wrttien was was another piece of paper attached. Aaron quickly filled in the information. Name, adress, class, level, and everything. Now all he needed were 3 teamamtes. Aaron was outgoing and active. He made lots of friends but, he didn’t know who to choose. Aaron thought to himself very carefully. “Who should I ask? Will they agree?” Many questions went though Aaron’s head. Aaron decided to ask these 3 people he knew quite well. Cloud a two handed sword fighter. Quiet and serious all the time. He was Aaron’s best friend every since they were born. Cloud was very powerful and almost never lost a match. Rikku, Aaron’s girlfriend. A powerful assassin. She made her own throwing stars which were far more powerful then others. And last but not least Eva. A powerful Ice mage. Aaron knew her since 1st grade. Aaron picked up the phone and dialed Cloud’s nubmer.
“Hey what’s up cloud.” Aaron said on the phone
“Nothing much.” Cloud was speaking in a mono tone type voice.
“Want to join my team for the tournament?”
“The national one?”
“Yea,”
“Isn’t that invite only?”
“I got an Invite.”
“Count me in!”
Everything pretty much went the same with the others. Aaron mailed to the letter with all the information filled out. Aaron’s first and final tournament was about to begin.
try typing this first on ms word, then edit it over like 4 times, checking for grammer mistakes and better vocab. The theasuars is your best friend.
Nice plot, kinda, clichish though.
nice clicish :]? lmao
BTW i dont have ms word ._. this comes out of my Maple story fiction note book. Long story :]
well, you can stil edit it o.O
and chichish is a plot that unoriginal, like the i’m gonna save the world thing.
hey meepters im bak i submiting my 3 chapter NOW
Finally done editing.