Fatal

First story pretty long
don’t be too harsh ._.

There I was in the darkest spot on the island.
Also known as the cursed sanctuary, waiting for the mighty Balrog to come.
I could barely see my own weapon, then i thought of something, if I could adjust a piece of wood in my backpack to some kind of torch and then lighten it with my Magical Fire Charge, then maybe I could see something.
I immediatly started to take out a piece of wood and tried to change it into a torch like thing with a knive that I took from a guardian who was guarding the Cursed Sanctuary.
Without sight I could barely make any adjustments, but still I tried my best by feeling if it had the shape of a torch. After a couple of minutes it was done and I immediatly used my fire charge to lighten it up.
I could finally see my own sword… but within it’s reflecting blade I saw 2 blood red eyes coming closer and closer. It was the Balrog I was looking for!!
I pretended as if I didn’t see him… after a while I could feel his breath blowing through my armor like a cold wind through a dark forest. He was about to use his gigantic claw to shred me to pieces….
But then I quickly drew my blade, turned around and got a good hit on him.
As I heard the Balrog howl of it’s pain I quickly took a step back, the light I had from the torch faded as the Balrog stepped on it and with that also putted out the fire.
All I could see were his blood red shining eyes.
Then the light of a Fireball could be clearly seen in the hands of the Balrog as it was shooting them towards me.
I evaded them easily but got hit in the back by his claw. My armor was shred to pieces and my back was covered in blood. There I lied on the ground weakened and thus defenseless.
I tried my best to get up using the energy i had. Once I was on my feet again the Balrog tried to give me another scar with his claw which I deflected by using my sword, I used all of my strength to get his claw to the ground and then pierced my sword through it so he couldn’t move it. I quickly grabbed the knive that I used to make a torch. I then ran towards his face to kill him by piercin the knive through his skull but I didn’t expect him to use his other claw. there i was in the claw of the Balrog with only one useable arm.
I tried my luck since there wasn’t any option left. I threw the knive at his head but only to strike his eye. He immediatly dropped me and used his claw to remove the sword that was still pierced in his other claw.
His howl could be heard all over the island.
I saw my sword near the Balrog. It would be too risky to just grab it and make the final blow as the Balrog was very close to it. I ran as fast as I could and took the sword quickly and got lucky that he wasn’t able to hit me.
With just one useable eye left it would be hard for him to see were I was anyway.
I decided to make the final blow.
He swung his claw at me while I stabbed my sword right through his heart. I got hit as well and was thrown against one of the pillars. The Balrog died and I lied on the ground trying to stand up. But I wasn’t able to.
The last things I could see before I went unconscious was a little dragon encovered in light flying towards me followed by the shady image of a human……
To Be Continued

3 thoughts on “Fatal”

  1. Wow you are a great writer. There are a lot of details. The only thing that you can maybe improve on is to make it a lil longer.

  2. lol well i thought it was pretty long already
    anyway next part of the story will come in a few weeks (i don’t have much time to write story’s like these)

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