The War Within Ch. 1

The Dark Lord looked out of his window, and saw the very bright flare star
so finally I must go to war, I must rally the thieves as fast as possible.

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Arthur was doing his normal morning training routine, killing gollems, at the Forest of Gollems. After a good 20 minutes, 2 experienced rangers came up to him and said

“surrender or die”

to which he replied “WHAT THE F**K!!!???”

They raised their arunds, and prepared strafe shots. They both shot at the same time. He easily dodged the projectiles, but one caught his leg. He jerked it out, and realized it was poisoned. He quickly chugged an all cure potion, and dark sighted. He crept up right behind them undark sighted and shoved his dark scarabs blades into the first rangers neck, and threw a pair of ilbis into the seconds head.

He went back to the first ranger, and asked who he was sent by . Through all the gurgling of blood he managed to say two words

“Eat sh*t.”

He new the ranger wouldn’t talk, so he could at least have some fun with him. He tossed some salt into the holes in his neck, and heard his screams for at least 5 minutes before he died of blood loss.

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When Arthur finally got to kerning he rushed to The Dark Lord’s house. When he arrived he told him everything that happened. The Dark Lord told him the warriors and archers were starting a war with all thieves, and mages. The Dark Lord also mentioned that
“he had to rally all the thieves, and form an alliance with the mages” The Dark Lord told him. “I am putting you in charge to make sure this letter reaches grendel, so we can form an alliance”.

For this mission you will need more then just yourself and that cruddy little black scarab. I have given you new equipment, it is waiting for you on your bed, in your room. Cerberus rushed up the stairs to find a whole pireta set, a godly scrolled black mamba, and 2 dragon tails(he was very happy The Dark Lord remembered he was a hybrid up until his third job advancement, where he chose to embrace the role of a hermit).

He ran downstairs and saw ill experienced 5 thieves. 3 assassins and 2 bandits. These thieves will accompany you to Ellinia, and if the need arises fight for you until they die. They quickly introduced themselves. John a level 63 assassin, the most experienced of the group, Jak a level 55 assassin, Ryan a 46 assassin, Emily a 50 bandit, and a 48 hybrid bandit named Wolfboy. My name is Arthur, but you can also call me Cerberus. They started making there way out. Before he left to start his journey to Ellinia, he said
“thanks for the awesome stuff dad”
“The lives of all thieves are in your hands, son, good luck.” The Dark Lord replied.
“I won’t let you down, father”

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I know this chapter didn’t have alot of fighting, but don’t worry the next one will be what everyone likes… ACTION BLOOD AND MORE BLOOD
So what did you everyone think of the first chapter?

8 thoughts on “The War Within Ch. 1”

  1. Comments, anyone? How can I improve it, does anyone like it at all?

    ~CeRbErUs~

  2. It was kind of sudden I guess. Try to make it longer. Don’t rush things. That’s about
    all the advice I can give. :]

  3. Thanks for the comments, and longer the next chapter will be

    ~CeRbErUs~

  4. Tai said: “It was kind of sudden I guess. Try to make it longer. Don’t rush things. That’s about
    all the advice I can give. :]”

    What do you mean by it was sudden?

  5. Actually the whole concept of swearing and cussing in the beggining made me skip the blog. People wanna read like, real stories something more mature i usually look at the quality of the words and how you describe things.

  6. Rasengan said: “Actually the whole concept of swearing and cussing in the beggining made me skip the blog. People wanna read like, real stories something more mature i usually look at the quality of the words and how you describe things.”

    If you skipped my blog you’re missing out, and your name seems really familiar. Do you play in bera by any chance on a character rasengan93 or something?

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