Cries to The Moon Chap 1.

-Cries to The Moon-
Chapter One: The Misfits

Shizu flew, dodging, weaving throughout the hordes of the people of Kerning City, “Crud, spent too much time robbing, Notasu sensei’s gonna murder me,” he thought, his blue white-bottom shoes scraping the ground. Flinging himself past another horde, he skidded to a stop at the gates, presented his Student ID and ran for it, giving a brief glance at the soon to be rising sun sky. “Ten minutes late…” he muttered, then propelled himself off the floor, crashing onto a construction site beam, “Argh, when the heck are they gonna finish this piece of shi-“ his curse was cut short by a punch to the face, which left him sprawling. “Shizu! Why in the name of Dark Lord are you this late?!” a man appeared from the shadows, somewhat muscular, with a Silver Identity covering his eyes, and a mask covering the bottom half, leaving a pretty much masked face. “N-Notasu sensei, shee, didn’t have ta PUNCH ME ya freak!” Shizu yelled back,
“SAY WHAT? YOU COME HERE ELEVEN FREAKEN MINUTES LATE IN MY CLASS, AND YOU’RE BEING FRESH WITH ME?”
“YEAH, GOT A FREAKEN PROBLEM WITH THAT, NO GOTTA GIRL SENSEI?”
A laughter sounded off in the distance, causing the two rouges to snap their heads to the right. “So this is how thieves act? Ugh, gonna be one freak of a team,” Ignotika said, shaking his head, “Well, at least we can get some cash from them, maybe to get a new bow for me,” Pocki smiled, laughing, “Or a spear,” Rose responded, swinging her “PitchFork” from side to side. “C’mon guys, give him a chance, just guard your wallets 24/7” Kyle laughed, putting his Iloon back in its sheath.
A flame flickered quietly in Shizu’s home, the new team quietly discussing what was happening.
“So, we’ve all been selected to form a team of special elite ops” Shizu said quietly
“Yes,” the rest of the team said in union
“And because we’ve all experienced a death in our family, our leaders expect us to be more able with assassination missons,”
“Correct”
“And we are to meet for something about dead things moving”
“Right”
“And you expect me to believe all this crud”
“Corre- IT’S THE TRUTH” the team shouted,
“OH PSH, I AIN”T GONNA BELIEVE TEN SECONDS OF THAT BLAM” Shizu hollered, then thudded himself onto his bed, “But since you say there are bounties…I suppose I could use the money,” he smirked, “But it’d better be worth my time”
“Trust us, it’s going to be, first meeting with your Dark Lord is tomorrow at one AM, be there.”
A Mushroom alarm clock hummed loudly, and a soft hand pressed the “Sleep” button. “Ugh, it’s one AM already?” Pocki groaned, then threw her blanket to the side, strapped on her armor, grabbed her Hunter’s Bow, and stormed out of the door after a hug to her family picture.
“Well, well, the archer’s late,” Shizu yawned as Pocki stormed in, a bit bruised, “Darn the monsters of Kerning City, darn them!” she yelled, clearly aggravated, “Well,” Rose pushed in, “We better get to the Dark Lord,” Kyle muttered, “Come on, before he gets mad,”

Ugh, got tired, will edit and finish later…
-ShurikenLord of Bera

10 thoughts on “Cries to The Moon Chap 1.”

  1. ME?! LATE?! HUH!? WAH!?
    *calms down* yay XD i’m in a story!
    I loved it! but it has to be longer, longer! and during the middle when you were talking responding, you have to add who said it and how he said it and what was happening. It would be much much better if you do!

    – VanillaPocki –

  2. Eee, go me and my pitchfork! lmao. XD. I really love this story so far. Keep writing! I want to see what happens to everyone.

  3. Lol, got tired. XD

    Anyways, good. Try to “Space it out a little”

    Then it’ll be almost to perfection~

  4. nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, sooo short, i, need .chapeter.2 i ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ stories

  5. Heh. I love the interaction between the main characters; you’ve done a nice job personifying them, just do as people say and space it out. Otherwise, it’s quite nice. Keep your readers happy, write more!

  6. LunarPanda said: “Ugh, gonna be one freak of a team, Ignotika said, shaking his head”

    Of some strange reason. . . I like the way he react to the team xD
    Very much like the way I would have responded ._.
    Yea, Ignotika is me ^_^

    ‘*EverydayHero*’

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