And here is my 2nd part of my stories,but I forgot to tell you the name,remember it and look for it!
The Ice Mage Redemption
Previously on The Ice Mage Redemption……..
Hey!Pick on someone your own size!
Make me
Lets fight,whoever loses,loses there wand/staff!
The Mage shot an Ice Bolt,it hit Matthew.He was technicly freezing to death,but he stil got up and tried to fight.He shot an Ice Strike,but the mage just deflected it.The mage hit him with one more Ice Bolt and Matthew fell to the ground,freezing.He heard a voice.
Matthew,you must believe in yourself,in your magic,BELIEVE!
When Matthew heard this,he started to glow,a blinding,white light.
“What the,But you cant do that!” exclaimed the mage.
“YES I CAN!” screamed Matthew,he shot an Ice Strike so hard the mage started to bleed.
Matthew stop!” told another wizard,who was trying to point out he almost killed the mage.Matthew fell to the ground,being stared at like a rare speices of animal.But How…. he tought while running.
He ran out of the cafateria,and met up with Mr.Denwood,the school counsul.
“How can you make a friend if you cant even control your own powers!” said Mr.Denwood.
“I dont know,I dont know WHY, or HOW Mr.Denwood.” he tried to say.
“You must believe to control it,you must control your body,your power’s are to much,control it or there will be no world!” Mr.Denwood exclaimed.
When matthew left,he went to Ice Practice at room 407………..
Matthew was trying to shoot a target when a sweet,gentle voice camed behind him.
“hi!” exclaimed the voice, “Im Samantha,whats your name?” she asked.
“Oh,hi,my names Matthew” he said,trying to not look like a fool.
“Well,is it ok if I showed you around?” she asked.Matthew didnt know much about this school,so he nodded.
After showing him acouple of things,she showed him the Cafateria.When Mike heard this,he fell to the ground like if someone shot him.
“Matthew!Matthew wake up!” Samantha screamed,but it was no use.Matthew was brouht to the nurse,who healed him and let him get some sleep.
“Wha,where am I” he said,shivering.
“You fainted Matthew” she pointed out.
“No wonder,” he said,”But it still hurts” Matthew said,he had a veyr bad headache.
Well maybe a get well kiss wll make you feel better” Samantha said.
Matthew Got up and touched her lips,he stopped 3 seconds after then went to bed again,falling asleep
“Bye Matthew” she said.
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Yeah. Decent story, just work on grammar a bit.
Work on grammar, and spelling. I know the spelling is just typing mistakes, but good story. Also check it over and edit it if you can to make it better.
Yeah, and if you have one, use a typing program that points out errors. I use one, and it makes my fan-fics look so much more correctly typed.