Sorry if this is a little cheesy,
This is my first atempt at a poem.
I have been wrighten book’s since I was 5, And this is my FIRST REAL poem.
Please dont flame me if you thinks it no good. 
~[Truth of the world.]~
Dwelling on what the world calls crude,
Everything the world does is uncomfortable and rude.
Staring at my led-covered clipboard,
I think of ways to make the world more pleasing to the Lord.
I made serving God my purpose,
It’s what I desire,
To make the Lord God number one,
To Hon my spiritual fire.
To let the entire world know,
Like holding up a spiritual flyer,
The insults and criticisms I take,
Only make me reach and hold it higher.
Being able to stop all madness,
To crush satin in my grasp,
Creating a world we never knew,
The figure that makes satin gasp.
The one I wish to serve,
The one, the only, The I Am,
To fulfill and accomplish his every wish,
To be covered in the blood of the Lamb.
~[Wrighten by: Leifgreen.]~
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that was good. keep it up
THANKS! I thought people would gripe at me.
(First attempt.) Thank you a lot 
Wow awsome poem keep it up, click my name on the left see Outcast of Elinnia Prologue and Outcast of Elinnia ch.1,ch.2
Leifgreen, it’s really good. Everyone’s like that when writing their first poem. See for yourself: link my first poem.
I got ya on the frontpage 😉
Uhm, what does this have to do with any MMORPG? o___o
~Mip
(And it’s ‘writing’ and ‘written’.)
it is related to a mmorpg, it was posted on s tie for mmorpg, thats a relation
, No. Not that’s not a relation. Posting it on an MMORPG blog site does not qualify it. This has to do with a religion. Not with a game.
~Mip
Oh, and isn’t satin a type of material? o.O
O.O, yea, a kind of Fabric ^^
first poem! nice try! Keep up the spirit!
– VanillaPocki –
This poem can be related to MS ^^ depending on which perspective you’re looking from. GMs can be “worshipped” too(not like the Creator of course but you know what i mean, >___>) and MS is like a small world ^^
– VanillaPocki –
Daaam. This poem is dark yo.
Especially the ‘blood of the lamb’ thing. I think this is my favorite poem. I’m going emo! (POTATO!)
That was the one of the best poems I’ve ever heard. For your 1st time that was really good.
Keep up the good work!