YAY! I have been working so hard on this; I hope this will be a big hit to everyone. I put so much thought into it and a lot more. I don’t think I released it at a good time, Released early in the morning of August 09, 2006, with a lot of other blogs coming out too. I hope you read and enjoy my new story. I may not comment on any questions and stuff for a couple of minutes. I got to go post this story on other Maple Story websites and what not. Thanks for reading if you do! I give you a thumbs up!
Also, I apologize if this chapter is to long. If you’re interested in reading it a lot, simply copy and paste it to a notepad and read it any time you won’t.
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Camp maple 1. – prologue.
Prologue.
The nice scent of the pine trees and the feeling of the pine-cones crushing below our feet triggered a wonderful feeling as we walked into the “Camp maple” Grounds.
Leafs and pine needles were falling on my dark brown hair as I and my good friends carry our heavy back packs to our cabin.
“Cabin number 777” I said pointing to a small wooden cabin.
My good and stunning friend: Stephanie packed the most out of all of us. She and Andy think they need to pack more then 3 pairs of clothes. Ha, ha!
Last but not least, my good pal “Andy” Who calls me KK When my name is Caleb, was looking around in paranoia since he’s a germ-a-phobic. It’s sort of funny in an odd way.
We un-pack and empty out our ruff and worn out back packs on the Cabin’s floor. The cabin was quite spacious with many hidden drawers and cabinets to hide and or keep stuff! Can you readers keep a secret? I hid my stash of cakes and Salads I got at Victoria Island back at Maple Land in a secret drawer by my small bed with fuzzy blue sheets.
We all soon heard a loud horn on a long pole, go off.
Everyone in OUR camp grounds was already outside.
“What do you think is going on?” I asked.
“Beats me. It’s best we think it’s for like a meeting of campers or something” replied Andy.
“Meeting of campers!?” I shouted.
“ALL RIGHT EVERYONE!” A very grumpy and manly voice cried over a mega phone.
I pressed my face against the window and Sal all the campers outside, but we were the only ones not over there.
I peel my face off the window and run out the door.
“Were late!” Stephanie cried as we all run down our properties small hill to be part of the meeting.
We finally arrive and salute to the scout leader.
“Eh? Who are these newbs?” The scout leader said pointing a sword at them.
A little man, a bowman, walked up with a clip-board and was flipping pages.
“These three?” He asked.
“This here with the dark brown hair is Caleb, and the short guy with black hair is Andy, and this young girl here is…. Stephanie.”
“Really?” wondered the leader.
“What Cabin do you abide in?” he asked.
“Cabin number 777, sir!” I said standing straight up.
“Hmm….What’s your levels?” he asked with an even more grumpy voice.
“Were all level 5, sir.” I replied.
The scout leader started laughing and tearing up.
“Well get in line.” He said calmly.
We all jump into the line of campers of all classes, and station our attention towards the scout leader. He was paceing around handing us uniforms because we are the NEWBS!
The scout leader was a scrawny, yet tall warrior with a badge sash around his chest and sides.
He held a high level warrior sword, though I could not tell what it was.
“It seems since you 3 did not even bother changing class back at Maple Land, You’ll haft to do it here.” He said.
“you’ll haft to earn your class badges.”
“Woo-hoo!” I shouted with my arms in the air.
“We get to have our class changed here at “Camp Maple!”
“Is that a good thing?” Andy asked nervously.
Stephanie remained polite, still in a saluting pose, ignoring Andy and I talking.
“But sir, There aren’t much people back at the new player cabins.” The little bowman whispered in the scout leaders ears.
“Three will make plenty out of the new players back there” The leader replied.
“All right you three!” he yelled as I and Andy nervously smiled.
“Report to the south when you put your uniforms on when you yet there. I wont you three to stay at the new player grounds until you get your class changed.”
“But we just got here.” Stephanie said.
“Here take a map.” He said handing us a small piece of paper with crayon sketches making a map.
“Cool!” I cried as we waved good bye to everyone.
“Little scampers” The scout master mummers under his breath.
“Ok, Where were we?” he resumed shouting in the mega phone.
The three of us followed the funny map until we found a large gap in the ground with a small amount of cabins, and we look at the map once more, to see the spot was marked with a X.
“Well this is crap.” I said.
~ [Written by: Leifgreen.] ~
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I suck at writing compared to u D:
as I said many times before, please use ms word to type out your stories. It has grammer mistakes and wrong word usage. A wider range of vocab would be nice too. Try describing things more into detail.
On the plus side, the plot seems interesting ^^
He ha, I do use MicroSoft Word 2003. But in September, 30, 2006. IT’S GOING TO EXPIRE! WAAAH! IT MAKES ME SO SAD!
I need to see how much it costs. So I can buy it fully. ^_^ Thanks for the nice commint on how to improve it! ^_^ Happy is me.
Haha, the new ms office ’07 is prgrammed by my mom’s friend’s husband. he works in microsoft
i dunno about the prices
I need a new MicroSoft Word program. SNAP!
^_^ Me is happy!
~Leif~ (My new signature!)
Nice plot and story. I Wondre if the next chapter will have camp activatys? Eh? 0.o?
DSLite~
Camp activatys, Got it!
THANKS!
^_^ Me is happy!
~Leif~ (My new signature!)
Again, I’m the 4th one to press the “I like it” button.
You better thank me for getting you on the front page, twice.
THATS IT! I’m puting you on my friends list, and going through all your blogs, and rateing them good, so I can get you on the front page! STRANGE REVENGE WILL BE MINE!
Yeah, but if you use more than 1 guy to rate a blog good, it isn’t gonna be good for you. Remember that
Sure Sure, I stoped doind that after ~Mip~ told me account sharing was a big frownd apond. So I stoped shareing accounts with my friend and doning my account only. (Thanks MIP~)
Ahahah
Oh and you’re still typo-man -__-
It’s want, not won’t. Won’t means “will not”. Read it any time you will not? I don’t think so =P
I HAVE OFFICE ’03!
IT IS SO TIGHT!
It’s a good story but don’t make them fight snails or something
blah (, )
Make it interesting, make a cleric use doom on a C rog and let them kill it. XD
Err, o.0″ I’m a Bowman on MS and I dont know much about other class skills. DANG! YOUR RIGHT!
sapphire8 : Oh and you’re still typo-man -__-
Leifgreen said: “copy and paste it to a notepad and read it any time you won’t.”
It’s want, not won’t. Won’t means “will not”. Read it any time you will not? I don’t think so =P
THANKS for telling me that, but no matter what I did, my program kept saying it was WRONG! I got to go ticker with it for a while.
~Leif~
PS. (I dont know how to quote. *’.’* )
i love this prolouge!