Burn out!!
The group continued wandering for a while. They had been staying in Ellenia for a while, of course, they were using names other than their real ones, and putting on disguises…. They were just outside Ellenia, when Kyasuke’s eyes suddenly widened. He stopped, causing the rest of the group to stop. Kyasuke slowly eyed Shin’s broad sword.”Wait a second, hey Shin, if you’re a spearman, why are you wielding a broadsword?”
Shin sighed, he had been hoping no-one would bring that up. It was quite shameful for a spearman to be carrying a sword.”Well,ya see….One day, I was strolling through a wood, with my Serpent’s Tongue in hand…When a thief pops up out of no-where, grabs it off me and runs off before I could rip his arms off….And I had blown most of my cash on that Serpents Tongue, so a Broadsword was all I could afford….”
Kiagaru suddenly burst into laughter.”THAT WAS YOU?!” He yelled.”So that serpents tongue I stole belonged to the future 2nd outlaw. I put it in the bank back in Kerring City.”
Shin’s eyes glared at Kiagaru.”You…Little…Rascal….I’M GONNA RIP YOUR ARMS OFF AND BEAT YOU TO DEATH WITH THEM!!!!!” He…Well…There isn’t really a word I could use to describe how loudly he yelled these words…… He dashed towards the assassin with what would probably be called ‘Hate energy’ in his legs, and just before his fist made a bone crushing impact with Kiagaru’s face, Shin smashed head first into an extremely large iceberg.
Keizuru sighed. He shifted his glasses up the bridge of his nose slightly.”Look, Shin, let it go, we just gotta head over to Kerring and get your Serpents tongue back.”
Kiagaru sighed.”Of course,we’re gonna have to walk all the way across the island, because we can’t use a Taxi, being outlaws…..And we’ll have to break into the bank, being outlaws..”
Everyone except Kiagaru slapped their foreheads.” You suck,you know that Kiagaru?” They all said…
((I can’t finish off this chapter now,as I am busy, so look out for Chapter 3 part 2))
lol what a coincidenceXD Kiagaru stole Shin’s spear.
btw. Do you mean that they were wandering first and then reached ellinia?
If it was the first one. Try to say something like: After wandering around they reached ellinia, where they stayed for a while.
This way the “jump” between things won’t be big or confusing, if you know what i mean. Because in your story, it says that they were wandering and then they stayed in ellinia, without saying that they reached ellinia.
So try no to make too big jumps.
(i’m sorry if misunderstood some things and i’m sorry if i somehow offended you with this.)
but besides the big jump.
Nice and funny story
keep it going.
great story
make more!
No I mean, they were like, Living in Ellenia, like, to sleep, but at the time they were wandering around.
Oh woops sorry ‘^^. So during their stay in ellinia they were wandering around. Ok i get it
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