Chapter 2 The Reunion
“Strav wake up”
“hmm what wrong with him?”
“WAKE UP!”
Stravenoth Jumped into the air as his eye pop open.
“Oh good your awake” I said
“DAMNIT CALOKO!” Stravenoth Replied
“How many times have I told you not to disturb my hibernation?” Stravenoth said
“Ok listen your a druid not a freaking bear” I replied
“Well Technically I am” He said changing into his bear form.
“That does not count” I replied
“Now get your things ready we’re leaving for molten core” I told him
“Oh no, Your crazy I am not stepping in there remeber what happened last time?” he shivered while saying
“Oh cmon we were young and not as strong as we are now I mean look at us we train so hard that we make Kam here look like a weakling” I Told him
“HEY! I’m still here ya know” Kam yelled angrily
“Sorry” I said. After Stravenoth finish putting on his leather armor we get ready to go to undercity.
“Wait I need to go do something you guys go ahead” Stravenoth told us
“Fine BUT NO SLEEPING!” I replied
“IT HIBERNATION!” He shouted
“WHO CARES?” I yelled back. We saw Stravenoth head into the hall of elders where great druid teach the younglings. That was where Stravenoth learned most of his skills my teacher resides in the hall of hunters but that a different story.
“So Kam anything intresting happen while I was gone?” I asked
“Well not really I mean you were only gone for about a month” She replied
“Oh ok” I replied. We headed towards the flight master.
“Orgrimmar please” I told the flight master as I got on the wyrven’s back. after we reached orgrimmar we headed straight for the zeppline (ok I know it spelled wrong but hey I don’t know everything) and headed to undercity. There I found a warlock by the name of Flameknight he is one of the great followers of Sylvanas Windrunner.
“This Power… I must have it” Flame said as he skimmed through an ancient tome.
“Flame you read to much seriously half these legends arn’t even true” I said as I walk towards him.
“Ahhh Caloko your as clueless as always” He replied. I took out my gun and pointed it at his head.
“Watch your mouth” I told him
“Oh please like you can beat my dark magic” He told me as he smirked.
“Oh I’ll wipe that smile off your face personaly” I said.
“GUYS STOP!” Kam shouted as she runs between us.
“We’re sappose to be finding allies not making enemies” She told me.
“Hmph” Flame cast a shadowbolt and aimed it at Kam. Flame’s Shadowbolt was so strong that it knocked her out instantly.
“KAM! NOOOOO DON’T LEAVE ME!” I shouted
“Don’t worry I just knocked her out she is not dead” Flame said as he walked away.
“I hate you flame” I quietly muttered.
Next Chapter
“You Dare challenged me mortals?”
The heat is unbearable. I almost passed out
“flame I know it was you who told him”
Chapter 3 The Firelord’s return
I’m sorry but this is uhh crap.
This is easily 30 paragraphs?
QFT.
QFT.”
QFT?
Uh.
Quoted for truth. o.o;;
, gee thx for hurting me seriously if you don’t have anything good to say DON’T SAY IT! do you know how hard it is to write these things?
Not that hard, actually Just try to practice writing until you feel it would be worthy material for publication. As my personal advice, read some good books of the genre you’re writing in, you improve your vocabulary immensely that way, and also pick up a variety of writing styles along the way. Initially, my writing simply mirrored that of my favorite author, but eventually I managed to develop my own from a mix of others. Planning what you’re going to write about, knowing how the plot will advance each chapter, and how the story will eventually end up will help immensely. And finally, when in doubt, you can use a dictionary and a thesaurus =)
hmm let me be more spacific do you know how hard it is to write it while doing 10 diffrent school works at the same time?
Not that hard for me. o_O
But honestly, if you have that much work, you should really be focusing on school and not something that takes a lot of time and dedication.
Hey I love writing and i don’t care what you say i will continue to write stories weather you like it or not!
TEN different school works? Honestly, if you’ve seriously got that much stuff going on, then you SHOULDN’T be doing this at all. No offense, but I find that the more that one’s concentration is divided, then the more shoddy – again, no offense – the quality of the work.
So I think you should probably finish the other stuff first, then focus everything onto your story. >.O
[Edit] But it’s good that you like writing, and I like your decision, like, to keep writing, regardless of criticism. d:
But constructive criticism is supposed to help. x.o
Of course, if you have homework from 10 different subjects, then by all means, stop writing and finish your homework. And what grade are you in? I seriously doubt you have more homework than I do with all of my AP classes. It’ called efficient time management. That’s how I am able to plan and write my series.
-=The Nazgul=-
I am in grade 9 and i might have essagerrated about my homeowork abit
It’s “exaggerated”. Obviously Freshmen don’t have nearly as much homework as Juniors do. In your spare time, I suggest you read books and increase your vocabulary like the people above me have said.
-=The Nazgul=-