As I ran throught the woods looking for Rogue I saw a shadow runing with me.
“Hiya Crystal” The shadow said as it jump out at me knocking me to the floor. It was Bunny she was following me the whole time.
“ARGH!!!! BUNNY HOW MANY TIMES HAVE I SAID DON’T DO THAT?!!!!!!!!!” I yelled angrly at her.
“Oops sorry” she said as she got off me. As I got up I threw a summoning bag on the ground between Me and Bunny. Then ran after Rogue yet again. I found her by a grave site at the end of the forest. It reads
“Here lies Kingstarz who’s bravery cost him his life.” I came up to her and wraped my arms around her. As tears drop onto my arms she pushed me away.
“Stop it your not King” She told me.
“Then i’ll show you that i’m King” I said as I look into her eyes. I place my hand under Rogue’s chin and lift her head up I close my eyes as I tilt my head down towards her lips.
I kissed her softly her eyes swollen. Then she close her eyes and wrap her arms around my head. She blushed
“The only person I know can kiss that way is King but….”
“I promise we will meet again” I said as I smile at her.
“Oh King I’m so happy your back” she said cheerfuly as more tears came from her eyes. I hold her tightly as I kissed her once more. As our lips touch again time itself stop once more. I never wanted to let go of her
“You know I’ll always love you” I whisper gently into her ear.
Mm, weird, but good, but SOO short -___- Anyway, good writing ^^
There are some parts where you go past tense then present tense in the same sentence.Try to fix that.It’s a good story.
~~Darkmonkey4~~