My darkness,hatred and anger flow throught my power increased.
“Wh..Wh..WHAT HAPPENING TO ME!!!!?” I screamed as my eyes teeth and hands started to change. I am no longer mortal.
“Crystal!!” Rogue shouted towards me.
“…..Grrrr” I growled as I leaped towards her. My speed was unmatched as I reached her face I quickly slashed her with my new formed claws. My soul has lost to the darkness within me I now walked on four legs like a fox. I kept slashing throught Rogue’s cloths and skin.
“C…C..Crystal…why?” She whisper queitly as she fell towards the ground. I ran towards No0dlez soon after he didn’t even see me come towards him as soon as he found out where I was I punched in the stomach then used my claws to slash him. After a few Scratches he fell onto the floor his whole body was cut blood spilled from his body.
“Crystal please stop” I heard Ice yell
“….Grrrr….” I growled as I ran towards Ice. This time I was stoped as a holy arrow stood infront of me.
“Die….BROTHER” A voice shouted from above.
(Dun Dun Dun Who is that girl will king kill her and everyone elsa find out next time)
all ur chapters a very short o_o
GOD what SO DAM SHORT TRY UR BEST MAN COME ON U CAN DO BETTER
, I’m trying geez
short but good
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Oh dear. . . the guy transforms into some demonic being and his brother protects those he is attacking. . . nice cliche
WTH, I’M NOT A GUY! I’M PPOP TO THE RESCUE! >:P
>.> sis that person could be anyone -_-