(Ya Ya I know what your thinking why am I doing this crappy story again? well the answer is I always finish what I started so here is chapter 2 injoy and if you dun have anything good to say seriously DON’T SAY IT!”
Chapter 2: A broken heart
“Well?” I asked
“I.. I’m sorry Rodney but no.” she replied
“Oh….” I said sadly.
“I’m truly sorry but..”
“It ok no need to explain I get it.” I said.
“Um I’m just gonna go take a walk.” I told Kati. I walked out of the store and shead a single tear. I headed down towards the 3-Road split to hunt down some snails to kill. One by one I kill a snail muttering angrily with each arrow. After an hour of blood shead I got tired and went back to the store. Noone was there so I headed to Henesys to talk to my friends. I got on the bus and told the driver to take me to Henesys. When I got there I paid the driver and got off.
“RODNEY!” A young theif said as she jumped on me forcing us both to fall down onto the grass.
“Ow… uh… Hi Riku” I said still rubbing my head from the inpact.
“So did you ask Kati out yet?” She asked.
“…..”
“Rodney what wronge?” She asked with a worried look on her face.
“She rejected me….” I said sadly sheading yet anouther tear.
“SHE WHAT!? grrr I’ll show her to reject my friend” She said angrily
“It ok” I said trying to fake a smile. Just then I heard Kati scream it was coming from her house. I rush towards a Mushroom-like house (ya ya they all look like a mushroom sue me if you want to). The door was unlock the screams were coming from her bedroom. I quickly rush upstairs I open the bedroom door and my eyes widen as I saw….
DUN DUN DUN
What happened to Kati?
Find out next chapter.
Sorry for being so short but I promise the next chapter will make up for it.
I like it, but I don’t think other people will. No offense.
Omg, I think you need some serious lessons about the site.
Merge your blogs together! It’s annoying when random blogs push others down. >_>
Darky’s right. I hate stupid random blogs (not this one) too.
-=The Nazgul=-
hate is a powerful word.
I prefer dislike, it feels less hurtful to the person your talking to.
But I do agree on getting the point across.
Bub.
SERIOUSLY I TOLD YOU GUYS IT WAS FOR MY FRIENDS ONLY WHY THE HELL DID YOU HAVE TO GO AND READ IT GOD!
Nevertheless, it’s still considered spam, which is obviously not allowed. Seriously, anything that is unrelated to MMOs (fanfics/comics are fine) goes in a forum thread or nowhere. Don’t get angry about the rules, it’s your responsibility to find out if anything’s changed after a long period of inactivity.
I bet your friends are barely even on MMOT anymore
The most recent blog was like September 07.
Why are you getting pissed off at us? Everyone has to abide by the rules here and you are no exception. And “if you don’t have anything good to say, don’t say it”? What if everyone kept bad comments to themselves? Everyone (except the naturally gifted) would plain suck.
So don’t start spouting random crap and getting angry at us if we say that your story needs improvement. Hell, with your attitude, I bet your “friends” would ditch you if you said the same thing to them.
Improve your writing.
Less punctuation, grammatical, spelling errors.
More descriptive, do not over describe.
[Boy, I’m listing down my composition exam notes XD]
Plan before writing.
Learn from examples, there are a lot of awesuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmm~! fanfics in this site if you can find them. [I recommend BlackNazgul’s work, he’s genius]
Overall, make it awesuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmm~!
XD
Lol thanks for the recommendation, but I think Kingstarz is gone.
-=The Nazgul=-
We scared him off real good, ain’t it? XD
Oh wellz. . .=/
lolz oo dont scare ppl away! mmo is not that big anyway, it’ll be bad if any members go’a missing :p
It won’t be bad if he goes missing.