AquaLuna PROLOUGE

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Once upon a time, the word was divided in 2 Heaven & Earth. Then the people in Earth claimed war against heaven.
1 Girl lost everything, her name? She forgot her own name. However she kept dreaming about to boys, she wondered who are they? When she met them she was, well, shocked so shocked that she remembered her name. The 3 of them became best friends. They embarked on a adventure and found a secret world called MapleStory, heaven called it, a forbidden land, however it’s real name was AquaLuna….What will happen? Find out in Episode 1!!

15 thoughts on “AquaLuna PROLOUGE”

  1. Annikabelle said: “HIIIIIIIIIII .

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    Umm, could be a LOT better and longer. But otherwise, decent idea.

    Also, try to fix the grammar a bit.

  6. Odd.
    Improve your grammer, and make it WAY longer, that was almost worse then a one-liner.

    ~~~~Pirkid~~~~

  7. It was a short prolouge, and yes thank you for pointing out my bad grammar I’ll try to improve it.

  8. Please, for grammar’s sake, don’t, DON’T use numbers for such small amounts, and don’t you 2 for to. It’s only one extra character.

    Also, the second half doesn’t seem to match the first half. Perhaps a slight connection would be nice?

  9. Repeat after me: Two. To. Too. Two. To. Too. Two. To. Too.

    If you need help determining which ones to use in the right form and sentence, feel free to PM me 😀

    It is a very nice plot, I give you credit for that . . . but this needs a lot of work on grammar, sentence structure, correct placement of punctuation, and a few more things.

    And this isn’t a prologue. Prologues are much longer in length, and are usually not in such perspective as you have written in. This would be correctly titled as a “summary”.

    EDIT: Oh yea, and welcome to MMOTales. I am your friendly neighborhood grammar nazi 😀 don’t be afraid of me!

  12. Thanks guys~ Ill try to be aware of my many errors next I’m currently working on episode 1 thanks for all your tips :D. I made a few fatal errors I just realized~.Instead of writing world i wrote word and instead of 2 or two I wrote to XD

  13. KijutsuAngel said: “Thanks guys~ Ill try to be aware of my many errors next I’m currently working on episode 1 thanks for all your tips :D. I made a few fatal errors I just realized~.Instead of writing world i wrote word and instead of 2 or two I wrote to XD”

    I like people who learn <3

    You are pretty cool.

  15. vicelin said: “

    KijutsuAngel said: “Thanks guys~ Ill try to be aware of my many errors next I’m currently working on episode 1 thanks for all your tips :D. I made a few fatal errors I just realized~.Instead of writing world i wrote word and instead of 2 or two I wrote to XD”

    I like people who learn <3

    You are pretty cool.”

    I like people who teach me stuff <3

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