Well! I have received many of the following:
-PMs from readers who want more
-Comments and PMs Regarding the name Jesus Freak
Well, I’m glad to hear that people enjoy my stories. Also, Jesus Freak—some people think that is OFFENSIVE to Christians. It isn’t, because I myself am a Christian. “Jesus Freak” isn’t a phrase we use on everyday terms, so I will my explanation brief and short. Jesus Freak doesn’t mean, “Jesus is a freak.” It means that I’m proud of Jesus’s love. Now that that’s cleared up, here goes my story!
I pulled open my sack, and pulled out a Power Elixir. I had very few of these, and saved them when I needed EMERGENY HEAL. I gulped down the Elixir. My body felt much stronger, and with no pain. I Hasted myself and everyone else on the ship (even the Spearman). I carried Lil Turtle on my back.
Me: Sam, what on we gonna do?! We’re in the middle of the sky!
Sam [sarcastically]: Well, we can jump -_-.
Spearman: Your ice is going to your brain! We can’t jump!
Roxanne: Would you rather die in a fire, or risk it and hope we land on an island or something?!
Bowman: She’s right, we gotta jump, and hope we make it somewhere.
—: Uughh. . .
Lil Turtle was coming back to her senses! The fire was warming her. Her cheeks were turning a bit red and she lifted her head.
Lil Turtle: WHA? What’s happening?
Sam: I kinda. . . set the boat on fire.
Lil Turtle: Eh. . .
Me: We going to jump, or what?
Lil Turtle: JUMP?!
Me: Would you rather burn?
Lil Turtle slipped off my back and walked out of the cabin. I followed her. She ran to the Captain.
Lil Turtle: CAPTAIN THERE’S A FIRE IN THE CABIN!!!
Captain: Eh? You say something lassie?
Me: You old fool! There’s a fire in the cabin! The ship’s on fire!
Captain: Oh. . . (snort) zZzZz
Just then, I saw a bottle pop out from under his coat. It was a bottle of beer. The captain tipped off and fell off his chair. This made a “THUMP!” sound on the floor. It was followed by many continuous crashes of more beer bottles hiding under his hat, coat, and pockets.
Sam: Drunk man, driving the ship, eh? Wouldn’t be surprised if we were off course.
Me: Hey! That’s right! We’re off course! I know there is no island in between Ossyria and Victoria, but if we’re off course. . . there just might be the chance that if we jump, we’ll make it!
Sam [staring]: Have you been sneaking in some booze too? That is the stupidest thing you’ve said since we met up again.
Me: You have any better ideas?
The fire was quickly spreading. We tore out of the Captain’s room to see that the sails were on fire! Roxanne was stuck on the top of the poles holding up the sales.
Roxanne [scared]: Eek! HELP MEEEEEE!
Sam: Ugh. . . do I gotta save everyone around here?
I used Haste on Sam and he jumped and teleported through the fire, not getting scorched. He carried Roxanne down next to the Captain’s room.
Roxanne [angrily]: WHAT ABOUT MY BROTHER?!
The rest of us: Brother?!
Roxanne: The bowman!
Me: (sigh) I’ll go get him, where is he?
Just then, the sail fell.
Voice: AAAAAAAAAAAH! UGGHHH. . .
I used Darksight and ran through the flames. I cut off the Darksight when I saw the bowman under the burning sail. The blanket of fire was covering him! I ran to him and pulled the giant sail off him. I could see Sam was helping. His armor was scorched and I could see that some of the sparks have gotten onto his face.
Me: I’ll get you out, I promise.
I carried him over my shoulders and used Haste. I jumped and dodged most flames. I reappeared with the bowman next to the small patch of safeness on the ship.
Me: Lil Turtle, heal him now!!!!
She used a healing spell and healed all his wounds. He still had some bruises, but he was alright.
Me: Well, lets jump!
Lil Turtle: You’re kidding, right? Because that’s not funny.
Sam [worried]: What about the Spearman?
Me: You’re gonna think I’m cold-hearted after I said this, but. . . I couldn’t care less about the Spearman. Let’s jump. I think I see some land under us.
We all closed out eyes and jumped. As far as I knew, we’ve lost two people. The Spearman, and the drunk Captain. I flipped over in the air, and looked up. The ship was falling apart. We were going to get killed before we reached the ground, if the parts hit us!!
Me: Oh my gosh! LOOK UP!
Sam: Oh-My-Gosh. . . What the—
Lil Turtle: Oh my—
Roxanne [crying]: What’s going to happen to us?
Bowman: It’s ok little sis. When mom and dad left us, they knew we could manage. I’ll take care of you. . .
The stupidest part was the there were flaming pieces of glass, from the Captain’s beer bottles. The giant sail was still on fire, but wasn’t tearing apart.
BOOM!!!
The ship exploded, parts were flying everywhere. Smoke flew and blinded our eyes. I suddenly had a risky idea. I quickly tore open my backpack and took out and pulled out. . .
To be Continued. . .
yes jesus freak comes from the newsboys song “Jesus Freak” and it does mean that
ps i am christian too its nice to know other christians are in the maple world telling others about christ
hiiiii veelen! w00 i havent found a Christian online is so long! =] nice to know you enjoyed this.
Good story. write the next one. xD
dang your stories are good, i discovered this MMO site last night and went up to 1AM reading them =)
o_________o wow. is that a good thing that my stories are soo good that u’d stay up till 1 to read em, or is it bad that ur blaming me that ur so tired >_>;; lol =] ty
lol i dont get tired, i used to hate sleeping becuase i was scared of the dark
-shrugs-. i am barely ever sleepy =].
Meh, I don’t feel like coming up with a wity way of saying “good job”. *claps*
lol! oventoasted ur original xP hehehe
wow, wish my stories were as good as yours *sniff*, you should seriously think about becomin a writer o_O;;
Lol Nice Job agian
I really like these stories, but I’m sorry to tell you that I’m not gonna read them anymore (it doesn’t really matter to you, you’ve got over a million others reading them). Since this is probably going to be a story that lasts forever with no ending, whatsoever, I’m going to stop reading.
it’s gotta end sometime unknownguy =/ just when im outta the mood (which might come soon– maybe not, dunno)
o.o; when are you going to write the next one? Hurry up and write the next one! XDDDD
I’ll kill you!
No, I love you,
ONICHAN YOU MEANIE!