Heh, I hope the last story got you to want to read more. Thanks for all the comments! Here is the next one. I hope it’s just as good, if not better. w00 free feel to PM me any time ENJOY!
I Hasted myself, grabbing a Kumbi from my pocket. I threw it, with mighty force. The Spearman picked up his spear trying a technique called “Power Strike”. I dodged nimbly. The Kumbi landed on his helmet, only leaving a slight scratch. The Spearman laughed at this, while the Kumbi just bounced off his helmet. He kept repeatedly doing Power Strike, eventually taking up a lot of his power. I could see he was sweating. I dodged all his shots so far. I was getting tired, and the snow was starting to nip at me.
Spearman: Take THIS you idiot.
He launched a Power Strike right at my chest. I jumped, but his spear was long enough to still strike me. He hit me in midair. I fell into the ice.
Me: Uuughhh. . . My ch-ch-chest. I bet my ribs are broken into pieces too.
Spearman: Haha! I think I win.
He smiled at Lil Turtle. Lil Turtle responded in tears. I still wasn’t ready to give up. I tried standing, even with the pain in my chest and ribs. Nothing was working out so far. I could sit up slightly, but then, I would always fall back. The Spearman laughed at this sight.
Spearman: I’m done waiting. I’ll kill you NOW!
He swung his spear nearly stabbing right through me. He ended up ripping my shirt. The cold wind bit my wounds. My blood was spilling everywhere. The ice on the floor was turning dark red. Just then the breeze blew some snow into my wounds.
Me: Ow! U-u-u-gh. . .
The snow stung my wounds, and was falling into my body. I couldn’t even believe that I let tears trickle down my cheeks. My body stung like crazy. The Spearman was walking over to Lil Turtle and making all these mushy faces at her, as if she was already his. She looked at him in disgust. She used her Cleric powers to somehow nudge the handkerchief out of her mouth.
Lil Turtle [in between tears]: C-c-hris. . . I’m sorry I got you into this. If I get you killed, I’ll never forgive myself. I-I-I-f you die, I’m dieing with you. . .
This time, I was the one staring in horror. I didn’t want any of us to die, well besides that Spearman idiot. I got up, with water and blood dripping from my side. I just couldn’t let us both die. I grabbed two Kumbis from my pocket. I launched my skill, Lucky 7. I was aiming for his robe, which was easier to pierce than his helm. It was successful! It shredded a part of his robe. I released numerous Lucky 7s. There was bloodshed everywhere. I had to do this slowly, because of the pain in my sides and chest. Much snow blew into my side, but I kept going on. On the Spearman’s body was blood showing all over his front. His legs were bruised and his handsome features have now faded.
A feeling in my body was feeling soft. I wasn’t talking about my flesh. I didn’t want to be a murder. I stopped launching my Lucky 7s. The Spearman fell to the floor. I cut Lil Turtle loose from her bonds. She quickly healed my wounds with her Cleric abilities. Even in he tear-stained face, she was very pretty. She was about to give me a hug, but I stopped her.
Me [motioning at the Spearman]: You forgot to heal someone else. Just heal him till he isn’t bleeding as much.
She stared at me for a while, then walked over to the Spearman. She patched his wounds, but the blood was still dripping slightly.
Me: Lil Turtle, bring along his spear.
I carried the Spearman over my shoulders to the local hospital. He got into a hospital room. She now gave me her postponed hug. It felt good to have her in my arms, and I think she felt the same. After a long time of holding each other, she gave me a very wet kiss on my lips. I didn’t know, until I looked at her face, that she was actually crying.
Me [soothingly]: Hey, what’s wrong?
Lil Turtle [calmly]: Nothing, I’m just happy you’re alive, Chris. You scared me.
Me: Heh, girl. You scared me! I didn’t want you to die too!
Lil Turtle [scared]: What if some other people go against us, like his other guild mates?
Me [rubbing her back]: Baby, it’s ok. We’re alone for now. . .
I rubbed her back soothingly as we both kissed a few long kisses. We were still in the hospital lobby. We walked outside together, with the beautiful El Nath sky and its darkness around us. The snow and icicles glistened, under the moonlight. The stars filled the skies as Lil Turtle and I walked around El Nath, with no specific idea of where to go next. So far, we’ve been walking next to each other. But now, she was leaning on me and was asking me to put my arms around her shoulders. I wondered what difference that would make, but shrugged it off and put my arm around her shoulder. It didn’t feel like night anymore. We strolled around a frozen pond, as she planted a kiss on my cheek. After a while, we turned in for the night. This time, I reached the Inn, alive. Heh, We both separated to our different rooms and went to sleep as we saw sunlight sinking through the windows and with the sound of birds softly singing a wonderful song.
To Be Continued. . .
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Man i love these stories. A lot of people here really have a talent for writing.
Dude, you are pwnage material, i am serious mention a short story contest to GMS, you are going ot place in the top one!
Aw come on, how did that spear not hit his heart or liver or something. =P Still good though.
This is awesome, cant wait till ur next one!
Doin great so far, keep at it.
If this sin alrdy has haste and is able to fight yetis, that should mean that he is lvl 5-60 correct? Then why is he still wearing a meba and his strongest star is a kumbi?
hes poor duh lol,
first of all it was those jr yetis o_o. 2nd it’s a story xD. lol. besides im a poooooor sin in MS anyways xD
Wahh, your on your 5th and i’m still working on 4 !
TT_TT <== Crying baby got owned x2
no no no. . . not owned. you just take time writing. . i used to be on writer’s block, but now o_O; i got um writers. . . “feels liek writing more”
I’m a noob, compare to you!
Your like the writer god!
WEEE THAT WAS SHORT BUT GOOD 10 OUTTA 10 IF THIS WAS A WRITING ASSIGNMENT I WOULD GIVE IT AN A+++++++++++++++++++
=D
hey jesus i like ur story i is damn nice so i decide to write a own of my but i did not copy yours hoped u see it!
jesusfreak plz go in my and see it is gd anot cause my 1st time thx ar
Nice! another good stuff u have porticially! =P