Well, since stories are so popular around here, I’ll decided to give a shot at them myself .
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The snow was blowing in my face. My face was numb, my feet were frozen, my stomache screamed in pain– from not eating much for many, many days. I am Chris, a top rank Assassin, of Kerning City. I clutched my Kumbi stars close to me, in case a monster was to come. But now, it wouldnt make a difference if I had a stick. I was too tired to go on. I was wearing my Bamboo Hat over my face, to attempt to block out the snow. My Meba was around my arm, barely keeping the frost from piling on my skin. I was venturing to El Nath. I was near it, I could tell. I was running out of food, and didnt know if I would make it to El Nath alive or not. Some people say getting there is half the fun, but right now, it seems that getting there is what I would call ‘survival’.
I shivered in the cold and finally made my way to El Nath. I went into the local store and sat on a chair and fell fast asleep. The warm, roaring fire felt like a warm blanket surrounding my body and wrapping me in it’s flickering arms. I could swear that I got to sleep for no more than 10 mintues when I woke with some old man poking me with a cane.
Old Man [dry voice]: What the ‘eck are you doin’ in my store you friggin’ tourist! Get out! OUT! OUT!!!
Me [sleeply]: Ow! Fool, stop pokin’ me! I’ll leave! I’ll leave!
I walked out of the store with an old man hollering at me. The cold wind stung my face as I exited the store. I heared the old man scream, “AND STAY OUT!” and slammed the door, as I left. I opened up my backpack. I had some Kumbis, Icicles, Mokbi, Wooden Tops, and some Wolbi. I also had some potions. All my food was gone, I ate it all during the cold, bitter trip. I decided to find a place to stay. I stayed at an Inn. The lady at the front desk showed me to my room. I bathed myself in some warm water and slept in peace.
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I awoke in the morning. I deiceded to go purchase some snowshoes. I was here originally for vacation, but it wasnt so after I learned that the trip took everything out of me. I went to go kill some little Yetis. I grapped my Icicles and went outside. As I was exiting El Nath, I saw someone. She was a Cleric. She had long, black hair. It was very smooth. She was wearing a Green Jester hat, wielding a Wizard Wand, and wearing some snowshoes, and the usual skirt and top for Magicians. It was a girl I had a crush on. Her nickname was Lil Turtle because she always wore something green. She looked very troubled. Being the coward I am, I rushed out without her seeing my face. I started killing Yetis, but half heartedly. What was Lil Turtle doing here? Why was she troubled? The thought of Lil Turtle being my girlfriend filled my head until a voice snapped me out of my day dreaming. Lil Turtle noticed me, and was greeting me. My stomache felt like it was full of Stirges. I replied with a shy “Hi.” She gave me a quick kiss on the cheek and teleported off turning red. I just stood there in amazement and willingly let a Yeti bite me just to see if this was a dream. It wasnt one. I continued killing Yetis with a stupified, smug look on my face. There was a sqeaky little voice inside me saying “She likes you!”
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Wow why would someone randomly kiss a guy? But anyways good story continue lol~
Oh nvm I missed the word “quick” Lolz
lol, i got only 2 comments after so many hours. XD. btw darkryoku, you can just say “i hated it because you obviously dont have the skills to be a succesful writer.” haha
THIS IS AWESOME!
cool this is great story. juicey like Aaru’s
samuel (killstealea) dis is ____ O_O, yeah it is lol you know me. im just anonymous to every1 else ^^
Why does a top rank assasin have only a meba and kumbis, shouldn’t he atleast have a slain and some steelys?
An advice to writer, first off this is SUCH a great story and try and read Aaru’s. Aaru’s blogs “ice covered road to dreams” are the BEST! and im sure JesusFreak’s will be too = ) keep it up. you write better stories than me
nicee. nice username too xD
I like your writing, but I think you could improve it by combining sentences.
*3 and a half thumbs up* xP
We all know you’re sushi chris