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I think this is one of the better ones I wrote~!~!~!~!~~~!!~!~~!!
Akio blushed. Abby smiled. Later, at night while Abby was sleeping, Akio stayed up. He heard an explosion in the distance. It must have been Mark and Liam fighting again. Akio teleported over to see what was happening. He hid behind a tree close, but not to close. “Hey…quit hiding.” said, Liam. Akio decided to join the fight. He was pretty much useless.
A dark figure approached them. Well, at least it looked dark. The figure launched a beam towards Akio. Mark quickly got in the way of the beam and got hit by it. Blood scattered all over the ground and over the trees. Mark was still breathing but he was badly injured.
Mark: *coughs up blood* oww….Akio run!!! I can heal my self….
Akio: Your in a bad condition……you can’t!!
I’ll heal you
Akio got struck by a sword.
Liam: You wont heal anyone….
Both badly injured they got carried to a base.
They both woke up. “Where are we?” said, Akio. No comment.Akio took a look over at Mark and noticed he was still asleep. “Ach….” the pain from when he got hit in the back. “You are both going to die” said a sweet, low voice. Akio went to get up and noticed Mark wasn’t there anymore. “W-what?” said Akio nervousley. All of a sudden Akio heard a scream. It was really close. “Mark!!” Akio screamed! “Do you want to see Mark” the voice said calmly. “Yes..” he replied. “Your going to have to beat this..” it said. Akio heard a piercing screech. What was it? Akio was going to pull out his wand. He couldn’t find it. Where was it? “Oh and by the way no weapons.” said the voice. The beast attacked Akio. It missed. It came back it hit him. Akio thought:
If I can’t see it then I’m going to try to hear it.
Akio got struck again.
Akio: Scratch that….I’ll heal myself to see it…
Akio could see. He got struck again. “What?” said, Akio. The light was right in that direction, too. “It’s way to fast!” Akio screamed.
Behind Marks Eyes
Mark finally woke.
The Figure: Finally you woke
Mark: W-who are you?
The Figure: Who are you?
Mark: Mark Johnson
The Figure: I don’t have a name. I’m a barlog tamer.
Mark: Wha…??
*Tries to launch a holy arrow*
ach…..
Mark just froze
The Figure: I’m a barlog tamer. I don’t have a barlog that’s the problem….if you get me a barlog I’ll let you go.
A bit better than your last chapter, keep up the good work.
thank you
Your welcome.
Good job, mate.
thank you
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