~Enjoy
Authors Note: I don’t think this will get your attention much but read it anyway >:]
kinda sorta funny in this 1
nice way 2 end the ship ride eh?
forget about the links 2 the previous chapters lookem up ya self!
Akio was going low on energy. Hikari came charging at Akio with a dagger in one hand and a man in the other. Then appeared behind him appeared a boy with a kage. He teleported over to steal Will out of his hands. “Whats your name?”, said Akio. “Just call me Dark.”, he said. Dark took his Kage and pointed it at Haruki. He paused for a second and then launched a little ball of energy out. Haruki started twitching and making an odd sound, eventually he died of blood loss. Akio’s mouth dropped open. He reminded him of Mark alot. Except he had never seen someone kill another person with an energy bolt. Akio stood there in shock, his mouth dropped to the floor.
On Jirou’s side.
“Ooohh. Hikari..you there?”,. Jirou looked around. He saw smoke from the other side of the ship. It was from Dark’s incredibly powerful energy bolt. Jirou rushed over to the other side. “Hikari! Are you alright?What did you do to him?”, he asked furiously. Akio just twitched. Dark replied, “Oh I killed him with an energy bolt.” Jirou used shadow partner and took out four ilbis. He fired them at Dark. Dark caught them and threw them back. Jirou stood there in shock. Dark fired an energy bolt. It missed but the pressure from it crushed Jirou’s arm. “Aghhh my arm”, he screamed in agony. Dark got the two burried the one and put the other one in jail.
After Akio’s jaw recovered, Dark and Akio went out training and drank a soda with each other. They became good friends.
=D
This series isn’t over
sorry short…
To be continued
© 2007
Jesus
Err, couldn’t you just edit the last chapter and put this in? It would’ve been a lot easier. Or you could’ve written more. Still looking good, just separate the dialogue from the text, but don’t make too much.
. . .Too short for me likeys rawr
lol =P
As much as I despise Dark, I have to agree.
Hey I have more tricks up my sleeve then that ZOMGW-TF powerful energy bolt. . .Thunder spear For Valhalla RAWR
I enjoyed it but it’s way too short
I really suggest you make your blogs longer. It doesn’t matter if you’re not catching up or not. It just matters of your pride and your determination to continue the story. Don’t make the story so short again next time.
im running out ideas when i write it down first and spend a few hours then i do well
Make up stuff as you go, like I do. It might end up creative. Just separate the dialogue from the text next time.
. . .AzN don’t fill his head up with crap write like when you write good ok?
Crap?! I don’t plan my story out at all! I just go with the flow and write whatever pops into my head! It can be a real lifesaver.
lol ok thats basically wut i do i o nly did it on 6
W-TF did you just say?
lol ops i said thats basically wut i do but i only wrote on ch 6
and that means?