Life On A Ship-Chapter Nine

Authors note: Sorry it took me so long to make chapter nine
not alot of action in this chapter
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Akio thought:
I only have one shot at this here it goes!

Akio clutched his Cromi, aimed and fired a holy arrows. Smoke filled the air because of a little explosion the holy arrows caused. Haruki dropped the knife and tossed Will aside. “Captain!”, Akio screamed. Will scrambled away from Haruki. Akio gasped. “Wow..that it?”, he said. Ilbis came from out of the smoke. Akio jumped aside. The smoke started to clear. There he saw two dark figures. It was Jirou and Haruki. Akio fired a holy arrows out both of them. They both dodged. Haruki he didn’t have to worry about he was Akio’s speed. On the other hand Jirou was as fast as heck. “Behind you!”, Jirou said. Akio turned around and looked. Nothing….”Aghh..”, Akio screamed. Jirou gripped his head and took out an ilbi. He looked at Akio’s bloody back. “Aghhh!!!!”, Akio screamed. Jirou had stick an ilbi in Akio’s wound he got earlier. Then Jirou threw Akio off the ship. He fired four more ilbis just to make sure he didn’t come back up. “Good job, Jirou.”, said Haruki. “Hah thanks.”, he replied. Jirou looked at the water to see if Akio was there. “Huh?”, Haruki said. Jirou rushed over and looked over the edge of the ship. The salty water shot up into Jirou’s eyes. “Aghh!!”, Jirou screamed. The salt stung in Jirou’s eyes and couldn’t see for a moment. Akio sprung out of the water launching holy arrows. He teleported though the air. It was like he was flying. Haruki was amazed. Jirou quickly took out four ilbis two in each hand. He threw them. Akio reflected them with his Cromi. He fired a holy arrows when he landed on the ship at Jirou. Jirou’s face smasked the ground. Blood came down from Jirou’s face face. “Darn it..”, he whispered. Jirou’s shadow partner wore off. “Darn it..”, he complained. He was panting he couldn’t keep up the shadow partners. Jirou slowly took out two ilbis and charged Akio as fast as he could. Akio could see him now, he was slow. He launched a holy arrow at Jirou. It caught his shoulder. Akio was also tired. “Hi-ka-ri..why…..don’t you fight..?”, Jirou said panting. Jirou passed out. Was it over already. Hikari, where was Hikari. “DARN IT!!!”, Akio yelled. Akio looked all around the ship as fast as he could. Not a trace of anything. Finally, panting, tired, and nothing left in him he found Hikari. Hikari had a knife to Will’s head again. Akio reached into his back pocket. He found a bottle Will had gave him. “A blue potion.”, he said. “This will do.” Akio said. He drank it in a matter of two seconds. Akio launched a holy arrows at Hikari. Hikari dodged it. Akio thought:
Darn he wont let go for his life.
I’ll have to fight close up but watch me attacks..

To be continued

sorry 4 being short

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Jesus

15 thoughts on “Life On A Ship-Chapter Nine”

  1. Rawrs! I will copyright my recruit sheet starting from this instant, people who want to use it must ask me first!

    Nice chapter, but make it longer.

    Jesus said: “Jirou had stick an ilbi in Akio’s wound he got earlier.”

    It’s stuck an Ilbi, not stick, past tense.

    Also, separate the dialogue from the story, it makes it easier.

  2. i copied urs i had no idea =S sorry can i copy urs?

    AzNxKnife said: “Rawrs! I will copyright my recruit sheet starting from this instant, people who want to use it must ask me first!

    Nice chapter, but make it longer.

    Jesus said: “Jirou had stick an ilbi in Akio’s wound he got earlier.”

    It’s stuck an Ilbi, not stick, past tense.

    Also, separate the dialogue from the story, it makes it easier.”

  3. I’m tempted to say no, but okay, since you did a good chapter. I shall overlook it. If anything happens again, *glares evilly at Jesus* you know what’s gonna happen.

  4. ok =D *inoccently smiles*

    AzNxKnife said: “I’m tempted to say no, but okay, since you did a good chapter. I shall overlook it. If anything happens again, *glares evilly at Jesus* you know what’s gonna happen.”
  5. Yay another one finally out and J can I be in your story unlike someone who won;t let me
    *cough*AzN*cough*
    that person won’t go down with spam eitehr how rude. . .

  6. Lol sure sign out the form, or do u want ur name just 2 be dark and rest unknown lol =D

  7. Name: DarkDragoon
    Age:14
    Features: Pale blue eyes, Brown hair that in the right light makes a golden halo(this is true), Metro Hair
    Class: Ice/Light Mage
    Hobbies: Reading, Training, Merchanting
    Armor: Black Enigmatic, Kage, Esther Sheild, Dark Neli Boots, Dark Panchone, Dark Infinium Circlet
    Height: 5 foot 7

    Ok so it’s the same one I sent AzN -glares- but with height sorry for the double post. . .

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