Held Hostage – Prologue kinda sorta
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January 1, 2007
Weather: Hailing
Location: El Nath
The weather is very cold in El Nath, but imagine it there in winter time. What if you had to spend a few months out in the freezing cold weather. This is a story about a young warrior about the age of thirteen going on a mission and save a few people. These people were not close and maybe not even El Nath. This warrior was, Billy Thorne.
Billy was undercover trying to find a few people that were reported missing about a month ago. He decided to set out now in El Nath just to get one of the most coldest and dangerous towns ever built. Billy tucked his Holy Spear in his jacket so it didnt shatter from the hail. Billys face was wounded from the hail.
I hate my job. Why cant I just sit around watching some TV? Instead of doing that I have to spend my time saving people. The only reason I did this was because m father did it and it was a good thing to do. Billy said to himself annoyed.
There in the distance Billy saw a glowing object, but it was hailing too hard for him to make it out. He started walking towards it. It took him awhile to get there because he didnt have snow shoes and the hail kept knocking him back.
Yes, finally. Im at the portal. Billy mumbled.
He put his foot on the portal and when he went through the weather was completely different. The sun was shining and snow covered the ground, but it wasnt hailing. They say when you go through a portal it could be completely different on the other side.
Ahhh. Thats a lot better than before. Billy said taking his Holy Spear out of his jacket.
A Jr. Yeti stood in front off him, but Billy swung his spear, wounding the Yetis neck and killing it. He started swinging his spear trying to get the blood off it, but it wasnt doing anything. Billy decided just to move on to his destination.
Lol
Next chapter will be better. 4-6 pages.
That is if
I continue.
I’m sorry but, some of your past stories were way better than this. What happened?
-=The Nazgul=-
I dunno.
I wanted to write something real bad. It will get better.
That’s good to hear. Hope your next chapter turns out great!
-=The Nazgul=-
A few syntax errors, but nothing TERRIBLE! ^_^
It was nice and interesting! Hope to see more soon. . . No seriously. ^_^
Now I should go study XHTML. . . Or play Tales of Pirates. . . 0_0″ *Runs off in a frenzy!* ^_^
– Little preacher man.
HTML is the way to go, my friend. XD
J-man used to be gooder. ):
Gooder no are a word!
-=The Nazgul=-
HOW DARE YOU LEABE ME WITH SUSPESE!
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*backs away slowly*
one away from the front page
Omgthatstorywasgoodkeepcontinuingdude
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Thank you. ^_. I hope you have a long attention span because next Ch is 6 pages.
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ima like it for ya =jesus
Thank you, muffin.