Why She Kept Her Head Down – Chapt. 1

Prologue: Making Enemies

(using the people who said okay for sure, and for more information – link )

NOTE: The story develops, i promise you. it has an incredible suspense affect to it by chapter 5 ish. i know the first few may be boring, but bear with me.

She kept her head down. She always felt self conscious around people, especially when they

stared. Though they couldn’t see her face anyway, because she always wore a hooded jacket,

even at school. Her mother talked to the school about it before she enrolled, and they

okayed it, so she always wore the black trench coat with the hood. She felt inferior, that

she had no right to be seen by anyone, and that her face should never be revealed for the

shame that she felt.

It was the first day of school, the day that she hated the most, since people only stared

at her more. She went to homeroom, which she hated even more because they always made you

get up to get your schedule. She could always feel the eyes of people on her, she hated

that feeling most of all; it made her feel trapped, claustrophobic– like she couldn’t

breath. That was the reason for the hood.

“Aliyah Royal.” The teacher called, holding up Aliyah’s schedule.

‘Oh no!’ Aliyah thought, getting up slowly and walking to get her schedule.

She could hear the whispers behind her back, she did her best to ignore them, but it was

hard. It was always hard for her ever since that day. A day she’d rather forget.

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“Guru-babe, let me see your schedule.” Gujju said coming up behind Guruji and

snaking her arms around his waist.

“Sure thing, babe. Here.” Guruji said, handing her the schedule.

“Oh, goody! Look lover, we have first, second and last period together!” Gujju said,

excited.

“Tight. So are we going to hook up tonight?” Guruji asked with hope in his eyes.

“Oh, you look so cute with that look on your face, how could I say no?” Gujju

answered, kissing Guruji on the lips.

“Okay! Guru’s gonna get some action!” Guruji said excitedly.

“What was that?” Gujju asked, narrowing her eyes.

“Nutin’.” Guruji replied quickly.

“Right, let’s just get to class.” Gujju said, leading him to their first period.

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Aliyah walked to her first period class, with her head down. That was a mistake however,

as she ran into the most popular girl in school.

“Hey! Watch where you’re going b*tch!” Gujju yelled, turning around to see who had

bumped into her.

Aliyah didn’t say anything, just remained silent.

“Hey, I’m talkin’ to you!” Gujju yelled out, totally pissed.

Aliyah still just stood there, with her head down.

“What the f*ck is your problem? You better answer me you little b*tch!” Gujju yelled,

grabbing Aliyah’s coat.

That’s when Guruji came.

“Hey! What the hell’s goin’ on?”

“This little b*tch ran into me and won’t apologize.” Gujju huffed.

“Whoa! Calm down girl!” Guruji said, holding Gujju back as she tried to grab Aliyah

and hit her.

Then all hell broke loose as kids gathered around and began to cheer Gujju on.

“That’s right, show her who’s boss!”

“Kick her @ss!”

“Knock the little b*tch out!”

“Teach her a lesson!”

Soon the principal came, pushing her way through the crowd.

“Okay! Okay! Break it up! Everyone get back to class! There’s nothing to see here!

Show’s over!” Mrs. Mipsacri said, shooing the students off to class. “Awws” being heard

throughout the crowd as kids began to walk back to their class.

“Gujju, don’t you think it’s a little early in the scool year to be starting fights?”

Mipsacri asked.

“But I didn’t start it! She did! She bumped into me!” Gujju exclaimed, pointing to

Aliyah.

“Regardless, it’s no reason to pick a fight. Now go back to class.” Mipsacri said.

“Pfft! Whatever.”

As she walked by Aliyah she whispered,

“Better watch yourself, freak.”

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Aliyah walked to her first period, not fast, just a slow pace. She never walked fast, which

made people stare even more, she knew this well, but she just ignored them and kept going

at her own slow pace. Many people thought that there was a freakishly ugly person underneath

that hood, quite to the contrary however, they were wrong. Aliyah was a very lovely young

lady, with slightly tanned, flawless skin and a nice figure, but since no one had ever seen her without

her trench coat, they simply thought that she was trying to cover up something.

Aliyah finally made it to her class, just as the bell rang. She walked in, looking for a place

to sit. That’s when she spotted her, that Gujju girl.

‘Oh no! Not her again! She’ll bother me, I just know it!’ Aliyah thought, trying to

find a seat before the temperamental girl saw her and tried to pick up where she left off.

She spotted a seat in the corner and quickly walked over to it.

That’s when she was spotted.

“Well, well, well. Look who’s here. The freak,” Gujju said, walking over.

“Gujju, come on. Not again. I think she might be a mute.” Guruji said, pulling on

Gujju’s sleeve.

“Oh well boo hoo. Look little girl, ‘cuz I’m only gonna say this once, stay out off

my way. Don’t touch me, or even look at me. Understand?” Gujju said menacingly to Aliyah.

Aliyah just looked straight ahead.

“Hey, did you hear me?” Gujju said, getting riled.

“Yes, but you said not to look at you.” Aliyah finally said, speaking for the first

time that day.

“Don’t get smart, just do as I say.” Gujju said, turning and flouncing back to her

seat.

“Don’t worry about her, she always get like this on the first day.” Guruji said.

“Guruji! Don’t talk to her, get over here!” Gujju commanded.

“Yeah, yeah. I’m comin’!” Guruji said, getting annoyed at her nagging.

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The day finally ended and kids burst through the doors of the school, running to their cars,

while others ran to the bus ramp.

Aliyah walked slowly to the shrine that she lived at. Her family was well known, since they

owned the shrine for generations.

“Mom! I’m home!” Aliyah yelled as she walked into the house.

“Oh good. I was wondering about you and how your first day went.” Her mom said,

coming out of the kitchen.

“It was okay, except this girl tried to pick a fight with me because I bumped into

her.”

“Yes, okay Mr. Wizet. I’ll be there right away.”

‘(Sigh) What’s new? My mother will never have time for me.’ Aliyah thought as she

turned and walked up the stairs and went to her room.

Aliyah’s mother was a lawyer and was always on the phone, even on her days off. Today was

supposed to be her day off, but once again as always, she got a call from someone at the

office and got caught up in work again.

Aliyah fell on the bed; she was exhausted, as always. She never seemed to have enough energy

for her hectic life.

Soon her eyelids grew heavy and she drifted off into a sound sleep.

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TO BE CONTINUED…Give me some feedback and reviews please!

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15 thoughts on “Why She Kept Her Head Down – Chapt. 1”

  1. AAHHA, cool, this is rich.
    I cannot stop laughing, well done.
    My part is so funny, i can never imagine myself being like that.

  2. i’ll admit, gujju’s parts made me laugh alot.
    and the character’s are interesting!

    i want to see what happenes around chapter 5 ish as you stated. xD
    good luck writing~!

  3. thanks gujju and aliyahroyal.

    @Gujju: i was afraid you weren’t going to like your part, but i’m so glad you did.

  4. aliyah = emo freak. =)

    i love it!
    lol.
    sorry, but i can say that right?
    being her sister and all. xD

    <33 Liviadia.

  5. btw, my next story will come out within the next day or two. since i have most of it already written. (just giving time for everyone to read them)

  6. Oh no. So far, i realy like.
    Sure, my being in it has to do with me liking it, but i really am not offended at all.
    Being bishy is a side i sure should explore.
    or. . . maybe not. . .

  7. Gujju, I think you shouldn’t.

    Good story! Btw does it have to do with MMO’s? Cause if it isn’t, you risk deletion o.o oh and, I think you shouldn’t use double line spacing. Only for between paragraphs. Makes it shorter while not creating a pain in the neck to read =D

  8. It’s so not. . . gujju-ish. xD Nor is it Aliyah-ish. But ah well. I like the angst. I can feeel the angst. Whee.

  9. Mip. . . is so not Mip-ish, but. . . it does mean ‘Steel-Whip Mip’ is taken to a whole new level~!

    ~Mip

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