in the morning we explained everything to my parents. they understood what was going on and took us to grendal the old. ” but brian, are you sure you weren’t spotted by anyone suspicious?” grendal asked. ” yea… why?” brian said ” if the evil ones spots you, they will try to do anything to get you… even kill your lover…” then grendal stared at me, ” but we wont let that happen, theres nothing we could do now but keep you here. unless eric is killed once and for all, you arent safe..” ” but how could he be killed? he ressurected once theres no telling if he can do it again.” mother said. ” yes but there is a way to kill the dark lord. you must make his most respected servant, by making him or her drink the pot of death, eric will die and so will his servent.” “omg… michelle… michelle must die?!” i screamed. ” yes she must die…” grendal said ” but itwasnt her fault! it was erics for making her evil! is there some way to kill eric without killing michelle?” i was in tears by now. ” well there is one… but we will have to use eric reincarnation’s heart which in this case is you brian. by taking his heart he will be in the darkness forever, he wont become evil but he will have no love in him at all. not even in you, jennifer…” grendal explained. i cried there was no choice, either kill my sister or my beloved. ” ill do it..” brian shouted. i looked up in surprise. ” i cant let my love me sad and miserable,i will sacrifcie my heart, but may i have some time?” ” lets see… i will give you a 2 year time, but be safe and if you see anything suspicious come here.” ” we promise..”
as we traveled the long road to henesys, brian took my hand and led me to somewhere else. ” come i must show you somewhere.” we ended up in lith where brian blindfolded me. ” its a surpirise” he said mysteriously. we were on a boat and when we landed he took of my blinfold. we were in florina beach! it was so beautiful and the sunset looked like a paintbox spilled everwhere. ” this sunset reminds me of your cheerful personality, the sand reminds me of your smooth skin, and calm water reminds me of your beautiful face. jennifer will you marry me?” i put my hands on my mouth then i started crying. tears streamed down my face making my mascara run. ” of course i will my love…” he then took out a box with a beautiful garnet ring. he put it on my finger and stood up. “ill never forget you, even if a darkness suscumbs me. i love you..” then he grabbed my waist and kissed me. i returned the kiss and we stood there on the beach as the sunset made our shadows…
pt 6 done! =] sorry it was soo short 😛
haha yep it was short(: like the story, purtty good*
u no how michelle put on the stripper show for eric! Michelle is erics daughter isnt she?
What he said,
LMAO i wrote shes KINDA like her daughter not literally XD its kinda confusing,
i like ur stories, just the dialoogue kinda hard to understand sometimes x_X
hmm, my silentedge is still there o_O ( looks up ) hm. . . theres a lot of. . . kisses and. . . intercourse and what not. do u reflect your life in your stories =O? haha. no offense if any taken x_X cant wait till next one [=
lol what with the i can’t let my love me sad and misrable?
anyways nice story girl geting very very good
LeetSpeak : hmm, my silentedge is still there o_O ( looks up ) hm. . . theres a lot of. . . kisses and. . . intercourse and what not. do u reflect your life in your stories =O? haha. no offense if any taken x_X cant wait till next one [=
LMAO i dont lol how could you think such things rofl no im not offended
When are you gonna make it?
i mean the part 7
i can’t wait until the next one =)
“a paintbox spilled everwhere” copycater! D: COPYCAT COPYCAT COPYCAT! tuck everlasting 😉
whoooooooooooooo i get to live! PWAHHAHA TOO BAD FOR YOU BRIAN! >D *evil snicker*
and then i shall become evil and take over the world! and jennifer and brian and tina and terry and eric and everyone else shall die! RAWR!
oh & btw, you write slow. or you`re just very sooper lazy. :]
oh yeah, and “eric reincarnation’s heart which in this case is you brian.” , so brian (LMAO LMAO LMAO I TYPED BRIAR AND THEN I WAS LIKE WAIT what) is eric`s reincarniataitjion hart? o-o sooooooooo erics going to die if brian dies? or is eric going to live and brian dies and everyone gets murdered? :DDDDDDDDDD
, shut up michelle lmao