I woke up in the morning feeling tired as usual…I just started training yesterday and it was hard. I started my journey from the Giant mushroom house where i was born(A.N=authors note)(A.N=The page where you create chars.Hope that clears things up)I started with doing quests from that girl who was crying because she is afraid something would happen to her skin-_-.I got her a mirror…I was thinking Whatever as i walked up to her.I got 1exp…Walking from 1side of the map to another it wasnt worth it! I walked through a pordal to this bunny girl. Can you ask what the boy in the house wants for dinner. Do it yourself i said to myself but i got exp oh well. Then thgis dude kciked me thats right kicked me!!!!! I lost 25hp then he gave me an apple and told me to eat it…” Here goes nothing”I screamed In my mind I said except for my life…I healed Woot woot! He Gave me some cans of tomato soup or so i thought… He told me it was Hp potions and i am like i bet it is poisined and he was like nooo and kicked me i got mad cause i lost 10hp. Then i started killuing jr sentitals cause this guy told me to. I got alot of exp and i got to get a skill. Which one… I know i choose 3snails !!!!!!!!!! So i went to sleep in the grass after this tutorial as the WMs calls it(A.N= i called it WM because this is like real life maplestory so WM=World masters =))
to wake up another day

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