I’ve always thought about writing a story but was devoid of any idea that would make a proper story. Eh, so I thought I’d take an idea I had for a manga which i wanted to make and I wrote a prologue for it. Makes things easier to put into graphic novel form.

Anyway, the point of this is that it shows the “master plan” being initiated that brings the whole world into anarchy; Bavarian Illuminati style (not the ones from Dan Brown books)!

And so it begins; it has nothing to do with any MMORPG at the moment. It may suck, but thats why you must leave constructive criticism.

Also, this was written for my class >.<;

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The World Trade Organization Headquarters was about with it’s daily business. Secretaries taking the calls and complaints; operators dealing with regulations; the bureaucrat judges attending the hearing; and the chairmen dealing with laws of trade between countries.

Dr. Ashura walked through the foyer of the building, crossing the emblem centered on the floor and then swaggering in his own manner towards the secretary. He was ecstatic for today was the day of reckoning. He was going to get a raise, a promotion, and be in charge of something incredible. However, the latter was of no value to him. Rather, he wanted to bring to the world something new.

“Well hello sir,” said the secretary as she looked up from organizing her papers consisting of names of various corporations.

“Good morning,” replied Ashura, “so when does the broadcast begin?”

“Soon,” she assured, “we have set up a link to the broadcast. Just run it on your computer.”

The doctor thanked her for the information and walked towards the elevators. He pushed a button with an arrow facing up and waited. The silver doors slid open revealing a red backdrop inside the elevator, he walked in and acknowledged one of the bureaucrats who in turn revealed a smirk and a nod.

“Changes will be made tonight,” began the bureaucrat after he placed his briefcase on the ground, “progress will become the true nature of this world.”

“Heh,” replied Ashura, “we’ll see.”

The doctor walked out the lift as it came to it’s stop and headed towards the main computer server located in the center of the floor. He opened the door and switched on the lights thus illuminating the supercomputer with it’s processor whirring. There were three other men in the room; each responding to the man at the door with a sheepish smile.

“Lets assemble what we need to,” said one of the men in the room.

Each one of the men grabbed a briefcase. Each briefcase held a different component of a mechanism much greater. They assembled it into what it originally was: an explosive capable of decimating the headquarters.

“Are those that are at the other organizations ready?” asked one of the men.

“Yes,” answered the doctor.

“Good.”

The three men and the doctor gave a moment of silence and prayer. They asked for forgiveness from their Supreme Entities and then initialized the countdown for the bomb.

“Okay men,” stated Ashura, “Now we stop this madness…”

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Well, this is the beginning I guess. I want criticism! The constructive kind! Don’t put in a rating, rather jsut tell me what I should improve on. And no, if you think there is too much dialogue.

Character list:

Dr. Ashura
Zade – Main Guy (the uploaded pic is zade 😀 )
Tamyra – Main Girl
Prof. Dan
Ninja – Leader of the “Anarcho-Capitalists” . . .better known as thieves
Dyxan – Leader of the Lawmakers
Zeyo – Leader of the SpeciMEN

Pardon me if its too political at the moment. It won’t be later xD