This is my first blog, and i dont think im cut out for making a story, so i just post a little poem i wrote for English class. I dont mind being flammed, seeing i got 100%, but do be honest;
Enjoy
Once you were a stranger.
Just another person in the hall.
But then suddenly one day,
you became my all.
We started out as friends,
then I realized you meant much more.
It was real love,
right down to the core.
When ever you were around,
things just felt so right.
Catching a glimpse of you once,
and my day would be bright.
Yours was the name
my heart would beat.
Never ending thoughts of you,
They always seemed to repeat.
Then I came to realize
my feelings were not returned.
My heart was broken,
And the little pieces burned.
But then for some reason
My love never died.
We still were good friends,
but I still wanted you inside.
It seemed that I had fallen
to deep in love with you.
A hole I couldn’t escape from.
There was nothing I could do.
I never understood
why you never felt the same.
I always used to wonder
if you thought it was just a game.
If it is, then I’m losing,
Because you are the prize,
And I can never have you,
So now I’ll say my goodbyes.
I’ll continue with my life,
Because I know you won’t stay.
Tears will well up in my eyes,
But I will walk the other way.
that was very good, i’ll admit i almost cried after reading the poem ;_; yes im a big softy -.-
Wow, excellent poem, fits right for me,
IT RHYMES! :X I can never make my poems rhyme: I just use the poetic licence of freeform
The beginning starts out corny, but the rest balances into a really neat poem! ^.^
not bad, it’s excellent! Truth is, I was crying TT
good job like silverfx said i can never make my poems rhyme well neither can i so i use the poetic lisence of free from too
XD
I really like it,
Lotso people can related to that you kno?
u rock,
(but wha does this have to do with maplestory tho? lol)
Kemcho Gujju-Bhai. Dekhai ke badhoo amra saroo nathi. Kaini, badhoo saroo thei jasée
i feel the same way about my special someone. . .
each word in that poem just. . . well. . . its. . . exactly what my heart feels for someone. I can’t explain HOW much it does >.<
love your poem man
awww so sweet, DUDE CRYSTALMETH STOP MAKING RUMORS JUST BECAUSE YOUR JEALOUS! WHO WOULD BE SO DESPARATE TO COPY A POEM? ONLY YOU WOULD DO THAT! AND IF NO ONE HEARD OF IT BEFORE THEN IT MEANS GUJJU MADE THE POEM HERSELF/HIMSELF ( sorry i dont know if your a girl or a boy) i love the poem keep writing! XD
fool, i ran an internet search and its not true. anyway, i’d stick up for ma gujju-bhai
i feel the same way about my special someone. . .
each word in that poem just. . . well. . . its. . . exactly what my heart feels for someone. I can’t explain HOW much it does >.<
love your poem man”
acually guruji, im a girl ><
so im a gujju-ben =D
EDIT: for those who dont know what gujju, bhai, and ben mean:
gujju is short for gujarti, the language i speak (indian language)
bhai means brother
ben means sister
omg reali nice poem ~wipes tears.~ yes im sensitive, gratz, no wonder it was an a+
very nice poem! i really liked it
keep up the good writin 
YO, this is already a published poem. This is copyright. Make ur own poems. Ur gonna get banned. This is published and in poetry books and on the internet, its a popular poem. I cant believe nobodys heard it. And u, i hope you get banned
awwww, so kyoot!
tears started swelling up in my eyes when i reached the end. This poem is awesome. I enjoy reading it. By the way, ignore crystalmeth, hes trying to get attetion and he copywrites Aaru. Ignore him. = )
Other than that, you did very well. I love it. = ) *sniff sniff*
~map1eholic~
yeah, gujju-ben. After i turned off the computer i realized that you could have been a girl. I hit myself in the head right then
I was like: holee sh@t! coulda been a girl! >.<
Oh, and gujju, i know 2 people who work at Canada’s Wonderland
I wanna know which ride/attraction you work at
OH! And tell me if you know a “Dhaval Tailor”(cousin who works at thunder run/bumper cars) and a “Jarred Dunn”(friend who works at vortex/trampoline thing for little kids beside FX theatre)
.
I know the place is huge, but you JUST might know em
lol, sorry guruji, i dont know them
i work at the place beside top gun, olde tyme photo, where we dress people up in funny costume and takes pictures of them
its actually pretty boring working there. I assumed it would be fun, but i realy just sit there watching other people have fun ><
i work at the place beside top gun, olde tyme photo, where we dress people up in funny costume and takes pictures of them
its actually pretty boring working there. I assumed it would be fun, but i realy just sit there watching other people have fun ><“
pretty awesome to meet a gujju person who ends up living like approximately 40 minutes away from you
. Well, i have been told that working at Wonderland is boooring.
Anyway, I assume that it was your fault that TopGun stopped working leaving people in the air just sitting 2 weeks ago. That was hilarious
. Anyway, next visit I just might stop by since i have a seasons pass xP
Anyway, i should be PMing you this stuff, but my PM doesnt work >.<
PM me your msn xP
and for anyone who wants to add me its: gameguruji AT NOSPAM hotmail.com
I dont mind talking to people off MMOTales and i dont use it as my email address. Ill just make a section for you guys xP
Is MMo getting Poems? is this the next age of MMO wel i like it
Awwww that was so sweet ^^at the end my eyes teared up OMG that SO good though