Maple War -Chapter 11- (Sour Legos)

FINALLY GOT THIS OUT! WOOPIE! WOOPIE!
And to make sure it doesn’t go all away again, I shall copy and paste this on NotePad every now and then.
Huzzah

But first, something I learned.

Huzzah- Huzzah has the same meaning as Hooray. It was used back in the 1700’s and early 1800’s by British forces as a war cry.
Huzzah has been modified into a new word and is now used by U.S. Military forces, of course, the word Huzzah isn’t used, the word that Huzzah turned into is “Hooah” (Who-Ah)

Lets begin with the chapter. . .

:.U.T. Capital Ship “Victoria” (Airspace near Orbis) -8:51 PM-

::Zakum Jr. looked off the observation deck to see Orbis. The once glorious city of fairys and architect, now looked like someone tossed a dead forest on it and painted it purple. It was a mess. Even from the distance between them, Zakum could see craters, fires, ruined buildings and more.::

“Such a waste of good programing. . .” ::He muttered::

“Sir.” ::MasterCheeze said as he stepped out onto the deck::

“Yes?” ::Zakum Jr. responded::

“Supreme Commander Nezzy has given the speech to the soldiers, and is awaiting your command.”

(Writers Note- In the version I was writing before it got deleted due to AOL kicking me, I had typed this intro but not from Zakum Jr.’s view, but Nezzys. It that version, it showed Nezzy’s speech, but due to its size, I decided not to type it all over again. . .since it took me a while to think up a speech. This version is Zakum Jr.s view)

“Supreme Commander??” :ne of Zakum’s stony eyebrows rose in confusion:: “Wasn’t he a Leuitenent?”

“He was sir.” ::Cheeze continued:: “But since both of G.C.A.’s leaders are out of action, he was quickly promoted to be the temporary Supreme Commander of the G.C.A. forces.”

“I see. Well, get on the line and tell the men the big plan, then tell all the ships that when I give the signal, we go in.”

“Roger.” ::Cheeze nodded and headed back into the ship::

::The “Victoria” hovered there among the clouds. Behind it, over 70 G.C.A. and N.U.T. ships also hovered, each one crammed with soldiers, vehicals, and supplies. Enough manpower and weapons to last a month of fighting if need be.::

::Through the radio that was “strapped” to Zakum’s wrist, Cheezy’s voice spoke through::
“You’ll be on the air in 3. . . .2. . . .1. . . .now.”

::Zakum spoke into the “Wrist Radio”::

“Alright boys and girls. This is it. The big one. Ahead of us right now is Orbis, once peaceful, now dreadful. The plan of attack will be as such. The first wave of ships will go in, this will include 8 ships in total. The captains of these 8 ships have already been told that they are in the first wave, so no need to say whos going in. Their mission is to destroy the Artillary guns on the ledge that the G.C.A. commonly used. When those guns are destroyed, the 2nd and 3rd waves of ships will move in and drop off their loads to support the remaining first wave attackers. When the 3rd wave has dropped off their troops and has fallen back, the 4th wave will move in and unload theirs. This will leave the 5th wave. Their mission is to curve around Orbis and cut off the retreating forces. Everyone understand their part?”
::Which was reluctent to ask since he couldn’t hear their responses::
“Good.”

::The first wave of attackers got into their position near the front and awaited the order.::

:est1, Veggie, and Darkness were among the soldiers in the first wave.::

::Everything was quiet. . .then, a red flare shot up from the “Victoria”, the signal.::

::Right as the flare went off, the 8 ships in the first wave shot forward toward Orbis.::

:rbis:: -Artillery Ledge- (3 minutes before the flare went off)

::The Sour clone CarsonDaily99 stood there next to one of the 3 fuctional Artillery batteries. The engineers had been trying to repair the others, but were having a hard time.::

::His buddy Trenton came up to him.::
“You hear man? Our guys took El Nath.”

(Writer’s Note- I commonly use the name Trenton for Sea Ship names. Either that or Triston. Or Trixston. And my cat is now on my lap. . . )

“You serious?” :aily99 replied:: “That just leaves Victoria Island. Soon all of MapleStory will be ours. . .this is sweet.”

“Tell me about it. Louis over in Ludibrium told me that once we take over all of MapleStory, we were going to take over Flyff.”

“Sour soldiers on SkyBoards. . .hahaha.”

::Both of the laughed. The Trenton looked past Daily99, out at the sky.::

“Whats that?” ::He asked::

“Whats what?” :aily turned around to look, and saw a red flare in the sky. The flare burst into a bright light, then fadded away.::

“That was the weirdest thing. . .” :aily shook his head in confusion.::

::Then he heard a noise. . . a low “whooshing” noise, like a wind was blowing, but the wind was getting closer::

:aily squinted his eyes to try to see through the dark clouds, plus the darkness of the night was also making it hard to see. Then, out from the clouds right in front of him came 8 ships with the “P.U.T.” banner.::

::Trenton’s eyes widened and he turned to run just as one of the 8 ships slammed down right onto the 2 Sour Clones, and one of the 3 Artillery guns. The alarm sounded, and the soldiers mobolized to try and repel the invaders.::

:: G.C.A. Ship “Tortilla”:: -Orbis Artillery Ledge- (9:17 PM)

::Veggie stood next to Dark as the gears of the ships hull door’s gears started to turn. It took some time for the doors gears to finish rotating, and the door flew open, around 10 seconds to be exact. Already, the soldiers inside could hear the “pinging” noises from bullets hitting the ships hull.::

“Ready man?” ::Veggie asked Dark::

“When are we ever truely ready?” :ark replied::

::The ships captain had come down into the hull just after the collision, and was giving some quick “words of advice”.::

“When that door opens, give them hell! Remember, your no good to us dead.”

::As he finished, the doors gears stopped cranking, the the heavy door flew open.::

::The horde of soldiers poured out of the ships hull and into the incoming fire. Soldiers dropped from the first shots, followed by their tombstones which appeared in the sky above them, then came crashing down onto their bodies..::

::Just as soon as the door opened,Veggie and Dark jumped behind a fallen pillar with some other soldiers, and started to blind fire the enemy::

(Blindfire- When you simply point only the gun around or over an obstacle, and open fire without looking.)

::The forces of P.U.T. and S.C.A. were spread out in Orbis, engaging each other like there was no tommarow. In some ways, certain circumstances could mean that there could be no tommarow.::

“YEAH! EAT IT YA FACIST PIGS!” ::Screamed once of the soldiers near Veggie who was firing at a small group of what appeared to be S.C.A. Engineers::

“Somebody’s having a good time. . .” ::Mumbled Veggie as he pointed his gun over the pillar and let out a spray of bullets, making one kill, and wounded one other.::

“You wish baby!” ::The soldier replied and grabbed one of his Grenades.:: “Heres a little gift for you!” ::The soldier was happy, but his smirk was whipped off his face, cause just as he pulled the Grenades pin, 3 of the spraying bullets coming at the P.U.T. forces struck him in his chest. The soldier fell backwards, dead, and the primed grenade rolled over to Veggie, and started beeping.::

“Ah HELL!” ::Veggie’s eyes widened and he grabbed Dark by his armor’s collar and pulled him with Veggie as he jumped as the Grenades beeping sped rapidly, then stopped.::

::The grenade went off, sending 2 G.C.A. soldiers sprawling onto the ground, disentigrating the “spunky” soldier’s body, and blowing off a large chunk in the pillar defense.::

“Wheres the fire?” :ark said in a daze after having been thrusted to the ground by Veggie::

::Veggie smirked at Dark’s sense of humor, when the ground shuddered by the sound of an explosion as one of the Artillary Batteries exploded into pieces. N.U.T. soldiers gave a victory cry, knowing one Artillery battery remained.::

:est1 ran as fast as he could while crouched with the other soldiers designated as the “Demo” team. Carried in his arms was enough C4 to make the 4th of July look like a couple of kids with pop-rocks.::

::The soldier running next to Dest was giving the 6 man team orders.::
“Dest. When we reach the gun, I want you to jam that C4 bundle into the chamber.”
::He said as he ducked under a burst of bullets::
“Donald89 and Tony87, cover him. InuyashaFreak and BubbaFish, you will provide suppresion fire for Dest and the others. Me and ArchieComics will use the Artillery shell boxes to provide a diversion for any enemy snipers. Lets do this!”

“Right” ::Replied the other 5.::

::The squad rushed at the Artillery gun and opened fire and the 3 man crew. The first crewman took a round to his chest and fell back onto the ground. The 2nd crewman got hit into his leg which caused him to crouch down right into the path of another bullet which ripped open his face. The majority of the shots hit the Battery, but a few shots hit the last crewman, which stumbled back and tumbled off the edge of Orbis.::

:est rushed to the loading chamber for the massive gun and started loading the C4 into the chamber. As he was loading, he noticed that the name “Axiom” was chiseled onto the Battery. Odd. He continued to load more C4 into the chamber.::

::Behind him, InuyashaFreak and BubbaFish were firing at some incoming enemies. Bubba took down two as they rolled over a fallen pillar.::

“Like shooting fish in a barrel!” ::Bubba shouted to his comrades.::

“So thats where you got the name BubbaFish from.” ::InuyashaFreak said as he switched his gun to the 3-Shot burst and fired at some of the soldiers using the airway Teleport pads.::

“Not really. On the weekends, I help my father’s friend Bubba, real name Charles, at his Fish shop. He gave me a Koi on my birthday last month. Thats why I use BubbaFish as my character name.” ::BubbaFish replied::

“Truthfully, thats retarded. . .” ::InuyashaFreak said, and continued firing.::

“Ah screw you!” ::Bubba replied, but then got hit in the throat by a sniper shot, he dropped to the ground and his tombstone landed on him.::

“STBU!” (Sucks to be you) ::InuyashaFreak said::

:est1 was still loading the last bit of C4, when he heard some chuckling. Looking over, he say that the one crewman who got shot in the chest, had pulled off his string of Grenades, and hand pulled the middle-one’s pin. It started beeping.::

“Ah **** RUN!” :est screamed as he started to turn and run.::

::The grenades went off, as well as the C4, and the entire area around the gun, spanning 30 meters, went up in flames. InuyashaFreak turned just in time to see a white flash of light, than darkness. The explosion also sent Tony and Donald flying forward, but worst of all, the explosions sent debris everywhere. One large chunk landed on one of the exposed Artillery shells the captain was using to create a diversion, cept the captain, and ArchieComics didn’t expect to be near the Artillery when it went off. The concrete chunk set off the artillery shell, which set off the other artillerys, and engulfed the Captain and Archie in a crimson flame.::

:est opened his eyes to see himself cluching a pipe protruding from where the sections of orbis was. 25 meters of concrete had been blown away, creating a sort of “half-circle” of hole from the edge. He gripped the pole and looked down to see the clouds below his feet. Mustering his strength, he slowly pulled himself up, and just in time to see another red flare light up the sky.::

::Nezzy stood on the Observation deck of the G.C.A. “Spamtrix” and saw the red flare light up the sky. He spoke into the radio he had been holding.::

“Wave two and three, forward.” ::A few seconds after he said it 12 ships started moving toward Orbis.::

::As quickly as the begane moving, the ships arrived at Orbis and started to unload their soldiers to assist the soldiers in Orbis.::

::Veggie looked over to see Axiom head out of one of the ships and start firing at the S.C.A soldiers, then his radio started beeping.::

“Yes?” ::Veggie said as he crouched down behind a box.::

“Veggie, this is Nezzy. (A RHYME!) Ships status shows that the ship “Imperable Vortex”s hatch is jammed. It must be stuck on something. I need you to head over there and unjam it so we can get those tanks out.”

“Roger.” ::Veggie said.:: “You and you.” ::He pointed at two soldiers.:: “Follow me.”

::The three of them headed toward the ship. To their right, a firce firefight was taking place.::

“Keep low for rockets.” :ne of the soldiers said, and the three of them ran with a hunch.::

::In the firefight, soldiers of both sides were firing round after round of bullets. And throwing grenade after grenade.::
“BLESS!” :ne of the G.C.A. Clerics shouted and pinkish light enveloped him and the surrounding allied soldiers.

::Veggie and the two others reached the ship to see that the hatch had tried to open, but got stuck on a large chunk of debris. He knew he wasn’t strong enough to move it, but luckily one of the soldiers was carrying a rocket launcher.::

“Every cloud has a silver linen I suppose.” ::Veggie said and took the launcher from him. He aimed at the debris and fired the two rockets in the dual barrels of the launcher. The two rockets spiraled and collided into the debris, blowing it into smaller pieces. Small enough for the door to open.::

::As soon as the door opened, a line of tanks rolled out. One top of one of them was Pirkid.::

“Thanks!” :irkid said as he rode the tank, his sniper rifle already firing at targets.::

:ark ran up to Veggie.:: “Veggie. We got em now! The 4th and 5th waves are unloading their troops over by where the batteries were.”

::Veggie smiled and him and Dark crouched down behind one of tanks. They followed it as it moved.::

::The tank , named “ShellShock”, rolled over some debris and fired at a group of fleeing S.C.A. soldiers. Due to his close range, Veggie could pick up some of the radio chatter of the crew inside. It was unclear who was saying what.::

“Run little mice Run. The big cat is coming for you.”

“Their more like cockroaches ownage. You kill one and two take its place.”

“I know that. Its just run watching them burst into pieces from this tanks shells.”

“Speaking of shells guys, you mind loading the gun? I can’t fire if its empty.”

“Right sorry.” ::Sounds of metal cluncking is heard.:: “Locked and Loaded.”

:: “Shellshock” fired off the round and it hit dead-on in the same group of fleeing S.C.A. soldiers. Soldiers, whole and parts, rained down on the others.::

::Axiom rolled over behind the tank with Veggie and Dark:: “SURE IS QUIET HERE!” ::She said over the sound of the tanks in the area, each one firing off shells.::

“I know!” :ark replied::

“WHAT!?” ::Axiom responded::

:ark moved closer:: “I SAID I KNOW!”

“OH!”

:ark continued:: “THE MECHS SHOULD BE COMING SOON! THAT”LL SPELL VICTORY!”

“YEAH!”

::Soldiers in the area could be heard cheering over their obvious victory. Orbis had technically been retaken. Just as soon as the last wave of ships did their job and eliminate the retreating forces.::

::Unknown Ludibrium Location:: (???) -11:41 PM-

::Izaac stood there in the odd cockpit. His arms and legs tied into the machines around him. His eyes had the look of rage.::

::His tone mocking.:: “G.C.A. did this, N.U.T. did that, Orbis falling into their hands. Nyah nyah nyah nyah nyah. Like they say, if you want something done, do it yourself. . .”

::He closed his eyes and focused his mind into the odd machine. Soon, his mind went into the machine itself, and Ludbrium started to shake.::

::Back in Orbis, the last of the S.C.A. forces in Orbis had been defeated, and everyone was breathing a sigh of relief.::

“Man. What I wouldn’t give for a nice slice of pizza right now.” :ne of the soldiers laughed as he was walking with his buddies::

“You said it. Extra cheezy.” ::MasterCheeze had said to the guys. He had been with the 8th wave stationed behind Orbis.::

::All the top soldiers had gathered to discus their next plan. Veggie, Dark, Axiom, Pirkid, Dest, McDingus, MasterCheeze, Ganzicus, Nezzy and Zakum Jr. were there::

“Well that went well.” ::Ganzicus had said, who had been with the 6th wave.::

“Tell me about it.” :est replied.:: “I mean. . .it couldn’t have been any easier, right?”

::Nezzy shook his head.:: “It could have. . .but be alert. The S.C.A. could have something up their sleeve.”

::As he finished that, he heard one of the soldiers cry out to everyone.::

“EVERYONE! LOOK AT LUDIBRIUM!” ::He shouted and pointed.::

::Everyone stopped to see what was going on. Tank crews got out, and Mechs opened their cockpits to see Even through the dead of night, they could see Ludibrium lit up from all the lights on it.::

::Ludibrium, was shaking?::

:est looked at Nezzy:: “Something up their sleeve?”

::Nezzy’s eyes widened, and he took a few steps back:: “Correction, not up the sleeve, but the whole dam sleeve itself!”

“What do you mean?” ::Zakum Jr. asked.::

“In case the G.C.A. was facing ultimate defeat, we had one weapon. An “Ace in the hole” if you would call it that.”

“Well what is it?”

::Nezzy looked at him.:: “Just watch.”

::Ludibrium shook more, then. . .it started moving. Lego blocks detached and reatached at other spots. Loud “clicks” and “clacks” were heard, even in Orbis. So many legos moved it made Ludibrium, if it was STILL Ludibrium, look like a sandstorm. A lego sandstorm. It seemed to take forever, but it finished. And everyone in the P.U.T. forces had the same horrified expression.::

::Ludibrium had turned into a massive, lego, mech.::

“What in god’s name is that!?” :ne soldier shouted::

::Nezzy spoke to Zakum Jr.:: “We reconstructed Ludibrium’s underworkings without the consent of the GMs. It was a “Low profile” thing. We turned Ludibrium into an unstoppable weapon.”

“You idiots. You clever, sick, twisted, idiots.” ::Zakum Jr. muttered.::

::The large Ludi-Mech started to step toward Orbis, then stopped. Turned around, it looked at Eos tower which was still standing.::

::Inside the cockpit, Izaac moved his body to make the mech move. Reaching with his right hand, he grabbed the middle of Eos tower and pulled it up. His lifted the long tower of his head and spun it. Eos tower was now a mech’s staff.::

::Nezzy blarred into the radio:: “ALL MEN! FALL BACK TO THE SHIPS NOW! GO GO GO!!!”

::As he spoke, a beam of red light shot out from the mech’s head, and headed toward Orbis. The beam ripped through the ground, about 30-35 meters in diameter, and blew a hole clean through Orbis.::

::Through the loudspeaker on the lego-mech. Izaac’s voice was heard.::

“NOW YOU SEE WHAT POWER WE HOLD! YOU WILL ALL TREMBLE AND DIE AT THE MIGHT OF THE S.C.A. ARMY! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!” ::Izaac had lost it. . .::

“Lets see you try it!” ::A familiar voice said through the radio, using both the P.U.T. frequency, and the S.C.A. frequency.::

::Izaac turned the mech to the left and saw a G.C.A. military “ballistic” chopper flying at him. Inside was Grimno, Fenrir, Fpooned, and TuxedoHobo. Each one smiling.::

“Today Izaac.” ::Grimno shouted:: “We end this!”

-End of Chapter 11-

::Finishes typing.::

“This is hard. . .”

::Then hears a voice:: “Its ok Grim. . .you don’t have to type anymore.”

::Grimno looked over to see Guy Sensei. Tears swelled in Grimno’s eyes.::

“GUY SENSEI!” ::He said and ran to him. The embraced each other in a passionate hug. Both crying::

(That was for Naruto fans. . .)

Picture 1- Thats Guy Sensei and me. Sorta. MUHAHAHAHAH

WELL! ENJOY IT! I GOT THE STORY OUT! SO ENJOY IT! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
Yay.

Ahem. . .

Next Chapter “Mega-Mecha-Battle”

8 thoughts on “Maple War -Chapter 11- (Sour Legos)”

  1. Nice chapter! But more importantly. . .

    I’m back in action!

    . . .

    Nah, i’m just kiddin’.

    The chapter was awesome!

  2. whoop! I read it! Even tho I should be studying for Math
    lol yeah I hate typing out the last few paragraphs of a story
    well ok, great chapter and go TRANSFORMERS! ! ! ! ! ! ! !Robots in Disguise!

    ~LaZzz. . .

  3. It it just me or is this very ‘Saving Private Ryan’ styled writing. The Omaha beach landings, everying getting shot up. Pretty good chapter. This is just an extract from a short story that I never finished. It’s similar style to yours so maybe you can compare them:

    AxiomFable said: ” Hydraulics hissed as the ramp went down, the first six men were mowed down by heavy bolter fire, which tore right through them.
    “Over the side! Over the side!” He roared as he grabbed the nearest soldier and hurled both of them into the icy cold water. “

    And something similar to blowing the artillery:

    AxiomFable said: “Edging across the wall was the members of platoon 184. One of them was bleeding heavily from the right leg. Another was missing their left arm. In total there were only five of them. Their NCO, Lance Corporal Hicks, told them that a mortar hit their LC and the whole of platoon 185 was wiped out. Together they two platoons set their timers on the demolition charges and flung them over the sea wall. They quickly backed away and a few seconds later, there as a tremendous explosion. Chunks of concrete scattered everywhere and when the dust cleared, there was a gapping hole in the wall.”

    ~Lily x33.

  4. Giga GASP!

    Your right.

    Even through I never actually saw the “Saving Private Ryan” movie. Well, bits and pieces anyways.

    ~Edit
    Fenrir. . .
    Something bigger!?!? ALL OF LUDIBRIUM JUST TURNED INTO A COLOSSAL MECH! HOW MUCH BIGGER CAN YOU GET!?!?!?!?

  5. oh believe me. . . It CAN get bigger
    like . . OH! OH! OH! I got a good thing. .you could give the giant robot like a giant sandwhich
    Now THAT would be cool! ! !
    And is the next chapter gonna be like “soccom boppem Robots!” or more like “We’re off to see the wizard, the wonderful wizard of Oz. . .”

    yeah and referring to Axiom’s comment ^^^^^^^ that is gooooooood!

    ~LaZzz. . .(extra freaky today? Nope)

  6. Ooooh Yay new chapter and school is over!

    Anyways give the robot a chunk of Orbis to use (hehehe)

    F*** Marriage -says Dark-

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