My name is Jeremy. I am a Page and I think Im dead. I mean I cant see anything or hear anything. I think Im beng carried off somewhere. But you know the last thing I remember was coughing out blood.
“Hey Jeremy? You OK?” Thomas asked. I looked up all of a sudden and searched my surroundings. I must be in Thomas’s car. I felt my head and found a banaged tied around it. I stared a Thomas.
“What happened?” I asked him.
“Well you kinda fainted and coughed out some blood,” he replied. I felt stared at my hand. It was pale and felt cold. I lost a lot of blood. I had a slight headache.
“Oh man how long was I out?”
“For about a few days.”
“Oh a few days. . .” I started shaking Thomas. “How long was a few days!”
“Todays Friday!”
Friday. I began shaking Thomas again.
“Todays my date with Ann!” I cried in his ear.
“Stop shaking me or we’ll crash!” he shouted. Oh right. We were on a freeway. I looked in the back and saw my armor and Doombringer resting near Thomas’s equipment. “I’ll drive you home so you can get ready for your date. Bring your Doombringer because you might need it for protection. Plus chicks dig strong weapons.” I starred at him.
“I doubt your intelligence.”
Hey! Thomas did have an IQ of 81. I had an IQ of 131. I woner what Ann’s IQ is. . .
I wore my common street clothes and borrowed Thomas’s car for the date. Unlike me, Thomas had a white Ferrari. Yeah he’s rich. But just before I left, I drank some Weird Medicine and pocketed a Weird Medicine in a pill shape provided by Grendel. I started the car and drove towards where Ann lived. I had a fair amount of mesos with me, 10,000 to be exact. I found her house exactly as the address said. It was a slightly bigger then mines but still small. I knocked on the door and she immediatly answered.
“Hi,” she said. Ann’s hair was still a beautiful brown and her eyes were still blue. I felt like it has been years since I saw her last.
“Hello,” I replied. She giggled.
“Seemed like what we said the last time we saw each other.” I agreed. She wore a white dress and tied her hair in a ponytail.
I drove us to a recent restraunt opened in Kerning City. I couldn’t remember what we ate but we talked about great things. I learned good things about Ann like she wanted to go to college and become a nurse one day. But I also learned bad things about her such as her little brother died a few days ago. I felt sad for her but she got over it. . . Just a little. When we finished I paid, and the price was about 3,000 mesos, and then decided to watch the ocean. We talked only a little while on the beach. I then noticed that Ann was crying.
“Are you OK?” I asked. She nodded slightly.
“Actually Im not,” she whispered before shedding more tears. I had no clue why she was crying. I scooted over to her and gave her a hug.
“Tell me whats wrong,” I said feeling slightly sick. My heart pain must be acting up. But I had to ignore it.
“I lied about my brother’s death.”
“Is that all?”
“Yeah. My entire family died.”
I dont know why I felt fear all of a sudden. Ann burst into tears and I just sat beside her, watching her cry. The pain in my chest became to hard for me to bear. I hunched over and groaned. I closed my eyes for a few seconds and reopened them. Ann knelt beside me. The tears in her eyes have stopped.
“Whats wrong?” she asked. I couldnt get any words out. “Im going to look for help.”
As she left I dugged into my pockets searching for the pill and popped it into my mouth. I swallowed the medicine wihtout any water and felt the pain leave. I was going to shout something to Ann when I saw someone grab her.
“Jeremy! Help!” she cried out. I took off toward her but the kidnapper ran too fast.
He threw a Steely at me and cut my cheek. The blood dripped from the cut and stinged but I couldnt care less. But the Steely had must’ve been poisoned and I grew weak. I lost conscience a few seconds later.
I opened my eyes and found it still dark. I felt the cut on my cheek and it could’ve been infected. I got up to my feet and began walking to Thomas’s car. I decided could do nothing else but go home. Ann had been kidnapped and I dont have any leads to where she might be. That was until I found a missing call in my answering machine.
Hello Jeremy. I have your girl friend Ann here and I could kill her if I wish. Bring me 50,000 mesos at Kerning City at that old warehouse.
That was the message. I got the 50,000 mesos out of my safe and checked the time. Midnight. I needed Thomas. I picked up the phone and dialed in his phone number. On the fifth ring he answered. He must’ve been still awake.
“What’s up Jeremy?” he asked.
“I need your help,” I said.
“Now thats why you dont spend too much on a just one date.”
“The date didnt even last that long!”
“Ann found someone more attractive?”
“I dont have time to fool around! Ann’s been kidnapped and I need you to back me up when things go from bad to worse!”
“Thats all? Great. I got nothing else better to do then sit home and watch old fashion movies.”
“Ill go pick you up. I also have one other question.”
“Yeah?”
“What did you mean that Ann found someone more attractive?”
“Dude I dont feel comfortable answering that.”
To be continued
~Love<3
Pretty interesting. A couple mistakes here and there, but still good overall. =)
Vely good. Very few grammar mistakes.
♠
3k seems kinda cheap for a dinner. You and your imaginations.
Nice chapter btw, I hope you continue this series.
Nice chapter btw, I hope you continue this series.”
Lets use that quote.
*Real life*
WHAT THE EFF?! $3,000 Dollars for a stinkin’ steak?!
Nice.
Great story.
Awesome story me lovies.
BUT HOW DARE YOO LEAVE IT WITH SUSPENSE!
IT MAKES ME STRIVE FOR MORE CHAPTERS!
*sense of deja vu*
D’you know, back in the old ‘heydays’ of MMOtales, there were all these romance stories that were like, guy meets girl, guy finds girl beautiful on first sight, guy falls in love with girl and/or vice versa, girl immediately gets kidnapped right after their first date/meeting/whatever by her ex/a random baddie with a grudge against the world, guy goes all out to rescue her, usually from the omgwthbbqPOWERFULEBIL Zakum, guy and girl lives happily ever after after that.
Uh. Yeah. >>; There were a heck load of those.
So excuse me for being a little wary about your story now. XD
^ CONFESSIONS OF A DK!
D’you know, back in the old ‘heydays’ of MMOtales, there were all these romance stories that were like, guy meets girl, guy finds girl beautiful on first sight, guy falls in love with girl and/or vice versa, girl immediately gets kidnapped right after their first date/meeting/whatever by her ex/a random baddie with a grudge against the world, guy goes all out to rescue her, usually from the omgwthbbqPOWERFULEBIL Zakum, guy and girl lives happily ever after after that.
Uh. Yeah. >>; There were a heck load of those.
So excuse me for being a little wary about your story now. XD”
Lol.
I remember those.
When I was new to the site and I searched every single username that popped up.
So overused.