My day: Poem style

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So I logged onto Maplestory,
And logged in, in a hurry.
I clicked on Aquila
While eating a McFlurry!

I chose my archer without a doubt,
And suddenly the screen went black,
Right when my mother shout:
“Get off the computer! Or I’ll kick your Jack!”

I whined and moaned,
Wishing I wasn’t getting stoned,
I got up. And got a slap,
I exclaimed: “CRAP! I got smacked!”

This ends the really short and badly written poem by Fenrir.

I think the poem sums up my day. . .=P

Its LAME! That’s what my friend said. XD

9 thoughts on “My day: Poem style”

  3. lol. u kinda switched up the rhyming flow. First stanza, second and last line rhymes. Second stanza (not sure if u did it on purpose) 1 and 3 , 2 and 4 lines rhymes. and third stanza, 1 and 2, 3 and 4 lines rhyme. so its messes up the floOooOOOOow. Other than that its ok.

    ~NSAA

  7. Sorry but the only good part is the rhyme (spelling?) which wasn’t even that great. Try writing about something more meaningful.

    -=The Nazgul=-

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