Well I finally decided to start writting a story so I hope you people will enjoy it.
Prologue
On that faithful day,everything looked the same as usual in the isolated land that is El Nath and yet something was wrong.In the Holy Grounds where no monster dared to approach and were humans showed their utmost respect,dozens of corpses were lying on the ground.They werent just a raggedy bunch of adventurers that were slain by a Werewolf,they were all part of the elite of the land.Those people have hunted and killed some of the greatest evils in the world;Zakum,Balrogs,Doom Flounders and many more.After years of adventuring they met their end at the point of a kunai,they were after a bounty and they died because of it.As the wind blew the snow away it revealed three shadows,the only survivors;the hunted and the hunter.
One of the three was a wounded dragon knight,his dead dragon lying behind him and his spear was lying somewhere deep under six feet of snow.The one standing right in front of him was a woman with a bloody kunai in her left hand and a shuriken in the other.The last one who was behind her was a man dressed in a plain white robe holding a holy bow and a notched arrow,aiming at the woman.The dragon knight did not want to die in vain,he was determined to sacrifice himself with his last breath to kill the woman and so he did.Weaponless and wounded,he mindlessly charged at the woman.She didnt know what to do,if she killed the dragon knight he would still be able to kill her.She couldnt run away because the other one would just shoot her,a terrible thought crossed her mind:Im going to die She glanced at the man with the bow and saw that he was crying,she also recognized him as the one that brought them all together.Just as she thought about that she remembered about when she first met them all,the day her world turned around.
She was a hermit,a person that dislikes social interaction,she lived in an abandoned castle far away from every town she knew,she lived inside the dungeon,in a secret location in the inner sanctum,where even the Jr.Balrog doesnt go.On that morning,as it was her habit,she was meditating and thinking of what to do with her day.There was a disturbance in the sanctum,she could clearly sense it,as she was wondering about the cause of it she heard a scream,the dying scream of the master of the sanctum,the Jr.Balrog.Shortly after that she could hear faint footsteps coming nearer and nearer towards her home.She silently called upon her shadow to aid her in the gruesome killing that will soon take place as she slipped next to the entrance,kunai in hand,waiting for her target.And there he came,all clothed in a white robe like a newly wed woman with his long blond hair and clear blue eyes to complete the set,for a second she was in shock but for that single second she wasted,her shadow didnt,it crawled behind their target,ready to strike.She held her kunai tightly against his throat and asked:Who are you and what do you want?her voice was as cold as the steel edge of her weapon and her shadow was waiting for her orders,shurikens in hand and ready to throw them.What he answered amazed her:Who I am is not important at least for now,I am here to offer you a job and my friendshipShe wasnt sure whether to laugh or not,this man who doesnt even reveal his identity is offering a job,to her,she was one of the most powerful being in the entire world and this man was offering her a job!The irony of this situation would have been amusing but she thought:Im not doing anything anyway so why not hook up with this weirdo and see how things go?If it gets boring Ill just kill him and find something fun to do.And so began their friendship,it all started with a kunai on his neck and a lethal shadow behind him.
Wee!Im done with the prologue now for chapter one,I should finish it in a short while but Im kind of training on Soul/Master Soul Teddys while typing lol.
I’m only going to post chapter one if someone comments or likes this because I don’t want to waste my time for nothing.
Not bad I like the meeting of the mage and hermit. (But what’s a kunai?)
Though there are some mistakes here and there, but the story sounds interesting. Do mind the spacing of the punctuation also. For example, a comma or a fullstop is usually followed by a space and so on. Keep it up!
Though there are some mistakes here and there, but the story sounds interesting. Do mind the spacing of the punctuation also. For example, a comma or a fullstop is usually followed by a space and so on. Keep it up!”
A kunai is a ninja knife,aka a Steely in Maple.
For the mistake let’s just say I wasn’t really 100% there since I was killing stuff
As for the spacing of punctuation I guess I kind of forgot,sorry.
wow, nice story, continue writing it!