uh…please don’t kill me or flame…or torment me with comments like…”YOU SUCK”, “GO HOME”, STHU” etc
…but you can give me a cookie 
i’m actually…very proud of myself..o.o”’
P.S. Gods & Masters = GM’s wakakakaka XD
P.P.S. I suk….
P.P.P.S. Please don’t flame….pretty please?! ^^””
P.P.P.P.S. THANK YOU FOR THE CONTRIBUTION OF DICTIONARY.COM, WITHOUT YOU, I WOULDN’T BE HERE RIGHT NOW!
Made by the Gods & Masters from the Heavens
The beauty, the Scorpio has arrived.
Domination, power, and fortune was it’s emblem.
A prophecy, an omen is defined.
Ambitious to find this godly hidden star,
Your soul, your mind took off to Ossyria.
The soothsayer claimed your star was very far,
dissapointment struck as you head back to Elinia.
Persistence was your weakness,
Optimism was your strength.
The Gods & Masters refused to be ruthless,
They saw your effort , they saw your strength.
Luck brought you to your godly star,
You were granted the Scorpio that you admired.
Your dream was no longer from afar,
but the omen is presumed.
Enamored by this gorgeous beauty,
the Scorpio was no longer in it’s jar.
Observation proved this beauty deadly,
as it’s presence can be sensed from afar.
Sacrifices was made for this god.
A vicious aura surrounded this maiden.
You have created chaos, known as the “red flood”,
It’s godly powers has finally awaken.
Cement is used to describe your stubborness,
Rain is used to describe my soul.
As blood stained and tainted your holiness,
I felt a piece of me gone, I felt a hole.
Obsession to this venomous beauty,
has caused you to become a savage,
My goal is Peace, I tried to speak lovingly,
You listened, and you glared and ended up in rage.
Repitition became my word,
You were annoyed and I became angst.
My prays, my beggings wishing to be heard.
The omen, the prophecy, is happening before me.
Punishment for whoever disobeyed your orders,
Letting your people live in salvation and depression.
Condolence wasn’t seen from your eyes, you started slaying your followers.
Your mind, your soul is captivated. You have become an Illusion
Ignorance has caused you
to lose your sanity.
I wished I had been there to help you get through,
to help you find your lost humanity
Our dreams we once had are shattered,
my heart still has a hole, a scar that does not mend.
Tears fall as I stand infront of a cement rock,
I am useless and flowers is all I can send.
I wish you could see me from the Heavens
The Love that we once shared.
The smile that U gave me will always be remembered…..
And the omen caused destruction,
The Gods & Masters made a tough decision.
They went against the will of this beauty.
They banished this beauty for causing a catastrophe.
I wish you can see what a beautiful land I see before my eyes,
But I shall not awake you. . . as you lay fast asleep for . . . eternity
*hands esteleonin a plate of cookies*
Choco chip, peanut butter, rasin, or oatmeal?
*munches on a chewy choco chip cookie*
Lol Esteleonin are you the one who started all the cookie eating and munching buisness?
Seems that it’s getting very popular ^___^
May I have some people’s MSNs please. Pretty please? *_*
*Hands everyone on MMO a plain oatmeal cookie*
And nice poem too, good job! You’re getting very good at blogging <_<“
Ok. . . sorri for double post but I just reread the whole poem.
1 word: Damm Nice Use of Words.
HOw much time you spent on this? Can I add you to friend’s? And can I have your MSN <_<“
Why do I keep asking that. . . I’m lonely that’s all. And I go to Summer School (Not that I’m stupid.)
I am a wanderer, yielding the streets. They are my home, my shelter, my place to hide from people, from the noise, from the laughter. Help me. . .
~David~
WOW
That was amazing!
I’m amazed that you could fit in a story plot AND make it rhyme! (Well, only half of the stanzas rhymed XD)
It was kinda weird that you re-used the “ar” rhyme and interchanged them between lines 1+3 and 2+4 (if that makes sense), but I still love it.
The descriptions were fantastic.
I remember I did some research on Astrology, and they were JUST like you described. Arrogant, yet lovable.
However. . . My FAVORITE. . . FAVORITE part was. . .
The genius bolding.
I love that.
I just. . .
overwhelmed with love for this :3
wahh, u write better poetry than me, and im a year older than you.
*hands jenny a box of ice cream*
~Serena
Oh yes. *hands cookie*
thank you thank you XD
>< darwar4ever, i spent around 3 hours ish, cuz i’m soo bad in english XD and i had to do research on some stuff >_> i’m an ignorant fella so i don’t know much, XD
THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING!
psccchhhh. My cookie!
That poem, was so, detailed, nice use of words!
I was overcome by the excellent use of bolding to form a sentence.
Too pro!
*sigh* I’ll never be that good. . .
(Sorry for coopying but I think you started a new trend :D)
BTW, WINDIACHICK started the cookie munching and she always shared it with me :3 and now i’m far, >_>
fat*, sorri for double posting,
lol, a trend, XD I ma write like that from now one, BOLD
2 1/2 thumbs up!
Your poem is very touching,
5 stars! *****
I am so clueless. I read through the thing, appreciated the nice words and stuff, scrolled down to read Indigo’s comment about a plot, and had to re-read everything for the plot because I missed it. It’s readers like me that spoil nice poems. :X
I hope you got the plot the second time, ><