Now That I’ve Met You – Chpt. 2

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I added Aqvarius to my buddy list and we trained together for a few times but the difference between our strengths were too obvious and he seemed really bored when he was with me. I decided to train harder so I can explore more dangerous places with him. I trained with my childhood friends Reviros and Asuka.
Reviros is the most experienced and humourous among the three of us. He’s always so energetic and for the past few weeks, he’s been claiming himself as Superman when he one hit K.O.s’ any monster.
Asuka is the quiet and gentle cleric. Recently, her parents got her a red starlight which complemented with her red shiny hair and she’s become so gorgeous…

“Okay! Listen, you’re still not used to using your ryden, so….you stay behind me and I’ll be your shield!” Reviros looked at me seriously and said.
I know he is hidding that little smirk behind that face…I know…
He started giggling after a few seconds.
“er..I know this is to harsh for you” I said scarcastically,”um…no…you’re too useless~ I’ll just need Asuka,” and I ran to Asuka and clinged onto her.
“*cough* les *cough*” he attempted a whisper, but it was loud enough for all of us to hear it.
I whacked him with my Ryden and started to flee because he started chasing me like a maniac and as I was screaming “child abuse” and screaming for help, I caught sight of Aqvarius.
I stopped and shouted,”AQVARIUS!”
He saw me and quickly finished off the Zombie Mushroom.
“Hey! I didn’t know I would meet you here,” as I walked closer to him and put on my best smile.
“Hi, I’m training someone right now,” he said as he looked back to find the person.
A girl walked out from behind him, and she looked at me. Her round black eyes captivated me and I just stood there until I heard Asuka and Reviros catching up to me.
“This is my…” Aqvarius introduced to us, but I couldn’t hear him because I blanked out.
*POOF*
Angel: It might be sister or cousin, stop being pessimistic…
Devil: PSH! She’s gorgeous don’t you see?! All men love gorgeous women and you know I’m right.
Angel: I think Mel, is cute…
Devil: Well. I’m just saying that there is a 90% possiblity that the word our little cute Melanie left out was GIRLFRIEND or even FIANCE
Me: …er…people..I don’t know, but right now, it hurts to hear that word. I think I like him.
Angel: Sweetie, you still have a chance! Now go back to your conciousness.
*POOF*
“MEL!” Reviros was shaking me and telling me to snap out of it.
“I’m sorry, um..” I hesitated.
The girl smiled and introduced herself, “I’m Yuna and I’m his –

to be continued….
…can this be considered a cliffhanger?!….o.o;;; I have like…the plot and everything and I think the beginning is kinda boring..but then..I have to slowly develop it so the ending would be really really good..><…first 2-3 chpts might be more like…introduction..><

7 thoughts on “Now That I’ve Met You – Chpt. 2”

  1. Uhh, Im not into your take on the cliched emo teen maplestory love thing, and the story is quite shallow, with characters you can connect too, but on a low scale, and the names need to be fixed, too many Japanese wanna-be FF1-10 references.

  2. thank you for your suggestions and comments, but i want to make something straight as I don’t want to be named poser or wanna-be or anything in that sense, ><
    Yuna = meaning of “Night” in Okinawan(jap) and appears in FF-X
    Asuka = Female character in Evangelion, name widely used among japanese girls
    Revrios= Monster in Tales of Symphonia (XD I thought it sounded pretty good)
    Aqvarius = Real friend in MS and I liked his name XD
    Melanie = ER, I dunno, couldn’t think of a better name,

    and yes, this is a kinda cliched emo teen maplestory love thing XD but er, i’m trying, lol

  4. You know you can click the + at the bottom right and click edit x3
    It’s an okay start x]

  6. Heh i guess some other pl did play tales of symphonia then i beat the game over 3 times already xD

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