I hope you understand the plot…but if you don’t..it will be after the poem…>< The bold words makes the sentence – Lost In El Nath Forever…if anyone couldn’t catch that..>_>
Enjoy~
I personally think that Your Scorpio was better..but this one was so hard to make..o.o”’
Left alone in a forgotten iceland.
Lonliness is flowing like sand.
Lost in a maze of ignored dreams.
Letters I wrote for you, are burned. It seems.
Immagination blinded me to see, how foolish I was to fall for you.
Injured by this heartbreak, a heartache that you never knew.
Effort was useless, tears that fell.
All I remember now, were eyes that swell.
Nothingness was what you made me feel.
Passion towards you is now in a seal.
Anticipation in you shall never reveal.
As hail cut deeply, the pain that won’t heal.
Forever was in a promise I once heard.
Forgiveness is the solution, it is prefered.
Perfidious was your biggest critical problem.
Dolefulness has become my haunting phantom.
A fever of affection towards you, has to end.
A time for me, to let my wounds mend.
A letter that I wrote for you, the letter that you never read.
Everything we went through is remembered, remembered in my head. . .
So! This is about a girl being dumped by this really ruthless mean guy…
Shes in El Nath acting really lost and miserable and wants to die…
Shes telling you about how she feels with difficult words no one knows..
This poem is bad becuase it doesn’t flow..the above is how the plot really goes…
AHAHAHA…the last four lines were stupid…i tried making everything ryhme XD It’s just soo fun…pretending to be poetic..>_> ANYWAYS! click the “I enjoyed reading this blog” if you enjoyed or liked it XD
I think i’ll just ditch stories and start writing poems…
oooooooooooooh!THE LAST SENTENCE HAS NO BOLD LETTER!I caught you red-handed!eh nice poem.
good job jenny!
cool poem! makes me think of when I was stuck in el nath.
Another poem from your part. Fantastic.
Really loved the bold letter part.
~David~
Hahhaha nice poem I was never stuck in el nath cuz i could just call my friends to help me xD
oh, that was sorta spiffy, like a tricked out acrostic
WAaaa, you are really good at poems, this one is so beautiful
Oh man, I CHANGE JOBS! I”M GOING TO BE A POET, FROM NOW ON AND DITCH MY UNFINISHED STORY XD
Great! I love it! Write more.
You could’ve made a punctation mark for the bold in your last line “Everything we went through is remembered, remembered in my head” if you didn’t need a letter,
But it was still great. . . I can tell you put a lot of effort in it. You can try to put a bold in every single line for your next poem, letter or punctuation mark or number. F2
oO JZaeterna Oo