21hi ppl
this is my first time doin sumthing like this…so…pls dont be mean o.o
um i was reading some other stories, and i liked the idea, so i wanted to make my own =)
>.< actually i cant think of any good names for this story…so if u guys hav any good ideas…nothing like xXblahXx please…
1~~~Part One~~~1
Sprite was miserable. He stared into the fire, and moved closer to warm his hands. His other guild members sat around the fire, also miserable, especially his brother, the guild master.
“Why do we have to stay in this lousy forest anyways??? Theres nothing to DO here”
“Do you REALLY want to know?”said Jenny, lvl 47 Ice Mage.
“Its because you just couldnt wait for us to buy you a stupid snack, and you just HAD to steal some from the store. Couldnt you at least use dark sight?!? Or use disorder on the store owner and take it!? He kicked you out with a freaking fruit knife, man.”
Sprite grumbled”Well im ONLY a lvl 27sin…jeez”
Then the other people in the Avengers guild started arguing.
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“SSTTOPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” yelled Coke, Sprites bro
“cant you guys stop bickering like lvl 3 noobs just for 1 second!?!?!?”
Suddenly the dim fire went out.
“huh???”
Suddenly a blue flash of light blinded the entire map
Now there was a tear in the air, a crease, and MONSTERS started pouring out!
Jr. Balrog, Yeti, Lupins, Lorangs, Octopus, Balrogs, Wild Cargo, Dark Yeti, Puppet Golem, Malady, Cellion, Lioner, Chief Gray, Wraith, Drake, King Block Golem, Iron Hog, Toy Trojan, King Slime, Mush Mom, and even green, blue, and red snails all gushed forth from the mysterious portal. The monsters lay there, confused and uncoordinated, most of them never have seen the forests of Ellinia before.
“oh crap!!!”yelled Pepsi, lvl 34 cleric.
Coke ordered the guild back to Ellinia

“Hey no fair!!! I cant use teleport!”complained Sprite, as they went from portal to portal, heading for Ellinia.
“well we all have Haste so HURRY up!”replied Sunkist
A few of the smarter ones, like 9 or 10 Chief Grays and Malady and Lupins persuaded all the other monsters to chase them, with promises of fresh meat, and terror. So all the monsters started chasing them, trying to eat them.
Sprite tripped over a root sticking out of the ground, and Sobe had to save him with his hp blow, killing a lupin.
Finally, they made it back to Ellinia. As they burst into the quiet town, the sentries ran forward and made a circle around them, guarding their way
“Hey, what do you think you’re doing! Wait until morning to come to Ellinia, everyone is sleeping!”said a sentry.
“Theres monsters after us! They started coming out of a weid portal in thin air! Hurry, get everyone ready!” yelled Sunkist.
“how many are there!?”
“about 200 total” said Coke

The Sentry ran, yelling orders, and somewhere, a deep warning bell started to ring, awaking and alerting all the citizens of danger.
About 7 minutes later, all of the able magicians were gathered in 2 forces, 1 at the bottom portal, and 1 at the top. The Avengers were with the bottom force.
Then, all was silent. As they waited, Sprite checked that he had his set of kumbi and mokbi, and his pots.
Then, the monsters came.
Sighing, Coke said “its going to be a lonng night”

End part one

erm im really sorry that its long guys, but once i got into it, i couldnt stop =)
pls comment on whether it is good or not, i want to know becuase its my first time
(This story has nothing to do with the “Avengers” if there really is a guild called that, becuase i just made it up)
and yes i know there are alot of CAPITALS, but i think that shows more…emotion…so lol…yea

wow that was fun =)

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PS i also need a title for mi story
ave-hay a-ay appy-hay ay-day!