Kinda bad because It’s alot shorter and there might be some mistakes
Chris and I walked home with linked arms and we walked through those doors with huge smiles on our faces. As soon as me and Chris walked through those doors it was like all the attention was focused on us. The ring caught the light and it glimmered Niecy came running up and yanked my hand and asked me what the ring was for and where it came from. I simply told her that Chris had gotten me the ring and that it meant that we were getting married. I told her that she would get to be a flower girl and get to wear a pretty dress. She jumped up and down with excitement and I told her to go play with her toys in her room for a while. Then Me, Jenny, Frankie, and Chris sat down and talked about what had happened and how. Then Frankie and Chris sat down on the sofa talking about it while me and Jenny sat at the kitchen table with a cup of tea that we were sipping on. It was almost like me and Jenny were having a girl talk while Frankie and Chris were having a guy talk.
We had alot of planning to do for the wedding and we started out by getting our outfits. I went over to the wedding shop with Jenny while Frankie took Chris out to look for a suit Niecy of course was left with Jeremy and Sherry. I managed to find a beautiful dress and when I got home I took it into my room and stored it in the closet. As I walked out of my room Chris and Frankie were just arriving home. Frankie took the suit up to the room and placed it in the closet while me and Chris ran into each others arms. We decided to go on a walk and headed out the door after telling Jenny and Frankie where we were going. I held his hand and walked by his side he told me he loved me and I stopped and turned him to face me, he put his hands around my waist and I put my arms around his neck and we leaned in closing our eyes, he gently pressed his lips to mine.
We continued to walk and we decided to stop off at a restaurant for dinner since it was around dinner time and we didnt feel it was time to go back home. We ordered spaghetti to share. We ate our food and continued to walk. We came up to a hill and stopped to rest, it was late at night now and the stars and the moon where shining brightly. We lay on the hill; I had my head rested on his chest listening to his slow steady heart beats. It was like a lullaby to me and I closed my eyes and drifted off into a sleep. He carried me all the way home and laid me in my bed I awoke when he kissed my cheek and just as he was about to turn and leave I grabbed his hand and kissed it. He then knelt down beside my bed and kissed me. I told him I loved him and he said he loved me to and wished me a good sleep.
The next morning Chris came to my bedside at 3:00 in the morning and kissed my forehead, then he whispered in my ear that it was time I got up. I gently fluttered open my eyes and looked up into Chris eyes. He took my hand with one hand and the other he planted under my back and pulled me up. I told him that I still needed to get changed out of my nightgown and take a shower. He told me no need that we werent going to be gone for long. So I took a jacket and put it on and followed Chris. He took a bandana and wrapped it around my eyes then he took my hand and led me to where he was taking me. After a couple minuets he took the blindfold off of my face and I slowly opened my eyes. I found myself standing on a cliff and the view was beautiful. He told me he brought me here to watch the sun rise with me. So we sat on the edge of the cliff and watched the sun rise. It was so beautiful that I just had to ask him if he could take me there again, he said he would, many times.
Chris walked me back to the house and it was only about 4 in the morning when we got back so we decided we should go back to sleep. Chris walked me into my room and laid with me on my bed until I was fast asleep. He put his arm around my side and curled up next to me falling into a sleep. When I awoke I found him laying by my side and then I looked at the time and it was almost 9 in the morning. I gently took my hand and ran it through his hair. He slowly opened his eyes and stared into my eyes and told me how beautiful I looked. A lot of people had told me I look good before but I never believed it until Chris had told me. He kissed me on the cheek and started to get up.
I just lay there acting lazy. He asked me if I was going to get up and I replied that I was feeling lazy. He said okay and went off downstairs. I lay there and thought about my life, and realized that Chris was the main reason I was able to find strength in me even when it was a hard time. He was the reason I was able to wake up every morning and feel amazing. I lay in my bed for about half an hour until I heard light footsteps in the hall. I turned over to face the door in case anyone was to enter. Sure enough Chris entered my room but not only did he enter the room but he was carrying a tray filled with breakfast food. I quickly sat up wondering what he was doing with all that food in my room.
He sat on the bed with me and we ate the food together in the bed. Halfway through the meal Niecy came running in and jumped up onto the bed and asked if she could have some; so the three of us finished up the remaining food. We all walked downstairs and Niecy ran into the living room while me and Chris stood there standing with our mouths dropped.
Jenny and Frankie got up and walked downstairs to see up standing there and joined up with there mouths dropped. Niecy had taken all the pillows from the couch and pulled up some chairs and threw a couple blankets over the chairs and put pillows as walls. She had built a fort and made a mess of the living room. She had also taken all the books from the bookshelf that were all in order and built a tower of them. Last of the things she had done was she had made mud pies and put them all in the fridge taking out all the other food to rot on the kitchen counter.
Chris and I wondered how she had done it so fast because he had brought me up breakfast but then again we will never know because we were all so angry that we all went up to Niecy and started shouting at her as to why she had made this mess and to clean it up right away! She said she was sorry and started to clean up the mess. The three of us were so angry still that we decided we better step outside to get some air. When we came back in we found the books cleaned up but the rest of the mess was still there then we headed up to Niecys room to get her to clean up the rest.
The window was wide open and air was flowing in so I went over to close it. They searched her room and couldnt find her so then they searched the rest of the house, still no sign. I was overlooking the room and found a bunch of pencil crayons lying on her bed and went over there. I was shocked to find a paper on her pillow. I brought the paper to the others and we looked at it. It had no words on it but we were able to read the pictures. It showed a picture of a broken heart and then showed a picture of someone who seemed to be running away then we all looked up at one another and I dropped the paper as we ran out the door in search for Niecy.
About 2 blocks down he started to see footprints of a small child. We decided it must have been Niecys and followed them. After a while of walking we came to the entrance of the dungeon and all looked at one another with fear for the dungeon was a dark dark cave with very dangerous monsters and she could get very hurt in there. We all decided to go running in looking for her. Frankie took Jenny to heal her if she got hurt and I took Chris to heal him if he got hurt. Me and Chris went fast with the haste while Jenny and Frankie took their time to overlook the caves in case she has been hiding.
Chris and I came to a complete stop when we saw a small dark figure up ahead lying on the ground. We looked at each other with fear and then ran over to the small dark figure. We approached the small figure but it wasnt Niecy, it was some just a pile of clothes, probably someones old outfit that they didnt need anymore and had left for someone else to grab. We then continued on looking and soon enough we came to enough dark small figure leaned up against a rock and we heard the sounds echoing the cave of a small little girls sobs.
We rushed over to the small dark figure to find Niecy. I quickly asked her what was wrong and she said something, but from all the crying I couldnt make out what she was saying so I told her to calm down and repeat herself. She was only crying a bit when she told me she was hurt real bad and we asked her what happened. She Took off her jacket to show a need cut on her side. Right then I knew this wasnt good so I told Chris to go back and find Jenny and Frankie tell them to meet us at the house. I then put my hand on Niecy and teleported us back to the house.
At the house I lied her down on the sofa and got some bandages and then I used my powers to heal her a little bit and then put the bandages on so she could make a full recovery. After she was done crying I got out some ice cream and gave her a bowl. She gobbled up the ice cream and then I asked her what had hurt her. She told me a giant evil eye had come up and scratched her and ran off. I told her It wasnt safe for her to run off like that without telling us and especially going into the cave alone. I told her next time she should tell one of us first and then she should ask for someone to accompany her. She apologized for taking off on us without telling us and that she would never try to run away from home ever again.
The others walked in the door and came rushing to Niecy and gave her hugs and kisses. After that Niecy went to her room to take a nap so she could recover faster. I told the rest of them what had happened and we decided we better not yell at her so much next time. We also decided it would be best if we went out for lunch because the food had gone bad and was no longer edible.
yeah, lots of mistakes, >< but, stilll, were human. i make mistakes too, lol, TT_TT
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Though there were mistakes, I could still understand it, so props. Read my story if you want. You might learn something like other people have.
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