Love and War Part III Henesys’s Downfal

Hi, everyone!!! If you liked Part 1 and 2 then read this! if I don’t get at least 2 people that liked this one ill probably end the series lol oh and if you haven’t read parts 1 and 2 then i suggest you read it… Anyway, here goes nothing…

In Henesys people are waiting their iminent doom… They hear drums and marching… Roars of giant monsters are also in the deep…

Then out of nowhere lightning strikes some archers on top of the walls!!! Everyone looks at the archers fried to death… Everyone around them was scared… And then again… MORE LIGHTNING… Archers everyone on top of the walls fall!!! Dylan and Jesse are on top trying to fend off the lightning…Jesse, the Hermit, was throwing ilbis trying to get the lightning to absorb into them so the lightning wouldn’t hit the people…Dylan the Priest was healing the injured archers…For some of them tho it was too late…Some of the archers on top had fallen off the wall and broken their arms and legs… Fighters, Pages, and all the rest of the warrior class were waiting on the ground for what was to come… They got nervous because of the archers on top dying so quickly…Christian one of the guild members of Bladex along with Dylan, Jesse, Alex, Rhawnie, Dillon and all the others, was a sniper…

Christian was on top shooting as many arrows as he could on to the coming lightning…All the low leveled archers and bowmans were asking what was shooting lightning at them…But, Christian was too afraid to tell them, but he had to… So he told them they where Taurospears and Tauromacis coming… All of them never heard of these huge beasts, but the name gave them the creeps… Then there was more lightning… It caught Christian off guard as he was thinking of what might happen to his fellow archers… Christian was hit!!! He survived it! All the archers around starting backing up… Christian was hurt badly… He could barely stand as he was leaning on his bow… Then more lightning hit him!!! About five zaps hit him before he had fallen…All the archers felt rage and anger as one Bladex was killed… Dylan was near, but couldn’t heal him as he was already dead… The archer class wanted revenge…

Down below the warrior class was waiting still for battle…They were watching the lightning hit the higher walls… It was pitch black so they couldn’t see anything, but the lightning hitting the archer class…Then out of the darkness a Taurospear came and hit 18 of the warriors at one!!! The 18 men flew all the way back to the wall…Some hit the wall breaking their bones and some went so high that their bodies hit the archer class above… The warriors were commanded by their leader Jericah, a female white knight. Jericah was also part of Clan Bladex… She commaned them to charge!! The whole army of Henesys ran right into war!!! Men were flying everywhere as the Taurospears and Tauromacis hit them!! There was the leader of the Taurospears!! Jericah took him down… If you were in the war you probably wouldn’t see a thing as men were running, dying and getting hit… TO BE CONTINUED

Haha!! if you liked this story you are just gonna have to wait for the next one! I love leaving readers on suspense like this! HAHA!!!! Well the next part will come out in…hmm…. about 3 days??? lol anyway enjoy the suspense!!! HAHA

3 thoughts on “Love and War Part III Henesys’s Downfal”

  1. It’s pretty good, but I think you should’ve made it in 1st person, meaning you are one of the chars. Otherwise, you could’ve put more detail in the battles, like describe their skills and have more dialouge.

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