Procrastination!!

LIKE OH MY GOSH I CANT BELEIVE IT!!!!

IT’S A NEW RECORD FOR ME!!!

I MADE IT!!!

I-
the person who cant write worth s#%&
the person who makes spelling and grmmmar mistakes every other few words

WROTE A 2 PAGE COMMENTARY REPORT IN 50 MNS!!!!

AND IT SOUNDS VERY SMART TOO!!
this is probably because i do well under pressure for english
(i wrote my other 3 page report in one night but alas
i kept it on my mp4 and it dropped out of my pocket. .i got an F -_-)

THIS REPORT IS DUE IN 24 MINS!!!
(i had an hour to do it or something like that)

If you time, please skim over my report and see what you think i might get ^.^;
since most of you are Super Genius Writers Extraordinaires please dont compare it to your work.
as then id have to not like it becauise it will remind me of the day you flamed my report
even though i cant write worth crap D=
dont blame me
bame Justice Fruit Pies -___-
it’s their fault
im telling you
whaa? you dont beleive me?
well you can go suck an elf >D
or a lemon
though the sour taste cant mess up your face more than it already is
You must have a million years badluck
for breaking mirrors wit your face!!!

Yeah it was lame, so what? >>;
i told you im not a good writer -___-;

HERES MY REPORT!!
(dont read it all;just skim it)

if you were my teacher what would you have given me?
dont be overtly mean either

The Haunting of Freddy
By Dietlof Reiche
Illustrated by Joe Cepeda

The Haunting of Freddy is an eye-catching book. I first came across it as I began re-choosing an English Festival book.
As I had been scanning the books, my eyes immediately jumped to a deep purple book with what looked like a hamster
creeping in someone’s yard. A closer look and I saw the title and was intrigued. Reading the book jacket and flipping
through the pages, I saw that this book seemed very interesting. Now that I have read the book, I can say that my
first look proved right.
The Haunting of Freddy is about a hamster that starts writing a book called THE LORD OF FERRETS when
his characters unexpectantly come to life! Now the adventure begins as he travels to a haunted castle and has to save
his friends -new and old- from vengeful ghosts. There is also a small side story as Freddy tries to ignore Enrico and
Caruso, guinea pig artistes, who take great fun in over teasing him. There is also the cat that seems to think their overt
teasing is just all in good fun. At the end of the story, Freddy got that cat back!
The story is a very good read and hade me laughing out loud throughout the entire story. There are, at certain times in the story, very chilling parts that were dark and scary. It is a very good mystery and would be a great example of a good kid’s book. It has a big

enough text not to make someone feel like there’s too much text and there are also parts in the story in which certain words or phrases jump out at the reader. In another few pages, there are illustrations that are made scratchily but still somehow fit into the book and how it’s told. It was a very engaging book and the illustrations and jump-out text helped pull me into the story.
The over-all feeling of this book is one that is somewhat light-hearted but still has its dark plot and chilling scenes. The characters are easy to understand mostly and the scenery is well-explained. This book also helps with visualizing the story by having the illustrations at key points. The Haunting of Freddy is very engaging and easy for readers to read. I would recommend this book to many people and also encourage them to read the prequels and sequels.

Is it written badly? considering i did it in 50 mins? T_T

PS the pics are of Foamy
and BAGELS PWN!!! MREOW!!

and on maplestory?

i still havent got to go to KFT
cant wait to go though i will need a benefactor to. . .help me get there >__
i dont even know where it is o.O

and why did i put my report on this website?
the stupid school computers have no more space and i dont have a jump drive and such
i didnt want my hardworked report
disappearing and stuf
stupid school computers -___-

~Cheezy

5 thoughts on “Procrastination!!”

  1. wow It’s good
    I don’t know the rubric but if you included everything you had to that could be like an A
    the reading of it was smooth and seemed very transitional
    lol book nerds UNITE!
    lol I tripped over second base in gym today!
    now my knee is all bloody
    ~LaZzz. . .(says much more than what is needed)(what a crappy saying I just made up)

  2. loo u tripped but
    owchy your bleeding
    be careful as it attracts sharks!

  3. oo i love sharks i going to the beach to cut myself on a rock,
    then go into the ocean 50000000000000000000 metres away from land and get
    eaten by a shark

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