1st time i’ll copy AnbuNinja04 for the begining.
Hi I’m Jordan…… my parents are making me go to this dumb new school called Vortex Hell. Pretty weird name. As I walked in a notice everybody starring at me students, teachers everybody. I went to all rooms looking for the principals office. At last I found it. Here you go Mr. uhhhhh …. whats your name? Jordan….. Oh heres your class schedules. I walked out and my 1st class was Sparring. I entered the room and saw that everyone was about my age. Look at the new kid hehe…. wearing a dark pilfer and a marine set hehe… I looked at the teacher he was pretty old i came tell by his ragged studded top and his studded pants. Take a seat over there Mr.Something. I made a face like this (-.-) and walked to a seat he pointed at. I saw a girl staring at me with great intrest and turned around. Jordan is it? Yes. Come up here. I walked up and saw a note on my desk but countined walking. Hmmmm who would match you? Ahh. Richard come up here!
Richard was wearing a slanted visor and a calas+ thorns. Richard your a perfect match with Jordan. Ready go fight! What?! I yelled. But I already was on the floor since Richard used a magic claw. I got up slowly and threw a few tobis. It hitted him on the arms but he countined attacking…. he came very close to me and I had to think very quick. My Mind wassoaring with these answers : kick him in the nuts, punch him in the face. I quickly moved my hand to a fist and punched him on the face and he flipped falling backwards. Pretty good Jordan. Ok sit back down Jordan….. Oh and you Richard if YOU have the streth to bully people how come you dont have the streth to beat him Richard! Hmph sit back down Richard. Up next Joe…. and…….. Stephaine. I sat down at my desk and readed the note : Do you have a GF? If you dont please meet me at the school gate tonight. Eh… I wondered who would write that to me. After sparring I got lost looking for my history class. The bell rang and I finally found the room and walked in. Ok class ….. Oh class this is the new student Jordan. Sit on a seat that comforts you. After a few moments class had began. 1st we had to learn about the great march of monsters. It was pretty boring until the book spelled out in words MONSTERS IS ATTACKING NOW! We spent the whole period reading. Then P.E came up next. Only Sins like me were there since we could do haste. Get in line! You get in line too!!!! I;m a new student i yelled across the gym. Should of told me. Ok stand over there. Everybody this is………. Jordan is it? Yea. The whole time we were practicing my haste. I could tell why this school was called Vortex Hell it had a few classes for all students and it was a living hell in P.E. The last class was self defense. It was pretty messed up when I entered a few snowballs were thrown at me but missed.
I looked around and saw the teacher was who threw the snowball. Sorry I thought no student would enter this early. Are you new? Does it looks like I’m new? Yes. Ok then…. Take a seat over there. All students entered moments later. It was pretty embrassing for 1 student. The teacher made him go up since he said he abosrbs pain. Ok class this is a exaple if you think you are weak. The teacher bent down quickly and used his gigantic and socked him the nuts. OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Class dismissed!
This school was probaly a cheap scape. I waited at the gate of the school and waited until a girl with a calaf, golden circlet and a cromi came to the gate.
P.S I will tell teahcer’s name tommrow when i write a blog
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O.o ummm, good job?
pretty good i guess
Needs more paragraphing. But hey, I love these kind of cheesy fanfics.
You could add some quotation marks though.
I kinda like it, but cant you use thiings like ” for speech? Its bloody confusing. Wun like it till you edit this.
IM gonna like love this series , i sorta quited mmotales before since usually they get really good then boring, or thy never finish , but i have high hopes for this one, DONT SPOIL IT.
Great! write more!