This is really short guys and girls. But it introduces some important elements to the story.
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Now! On with the story!
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From the memories of Sonia
The servant, who actually looked like a chief bandit even though he was dressed in a tuxedo, but I saw a shining dragons tail on his belt and a nimble wrist guard on the other side. He looked at me in a confusing way, he opened his mouth and said something, but all I heard was a sudden piercing scream that resonated around my head. Exactly the one like I heard when the Shades were being attacked. He muttered something else, but I couldnt hear, screams continued resonating in and out my ears. He looked at me with a surprised look, then, without warning he casted a dark shadow and took off, running down the corridor.
I tried to follow him and his large shadow, copying his every move, but I was once again stopped by another howl. I covered my ears and remembered my main purpose: to find my parents (and my brother). I remembered that the servant mentioned how they were living somewhere around the building. So I gave up chasing the guy and wandered on the opposite direction, searching for the presence of them.
But as I stumbled through the long, golden corridor, more screams followed. Somehow, I found the will to go on. I wanted dearly to find my family, my source of warmth. But something happened sort of like I cant remember. I think it was an explosion that was actually IN my head, I dont remember falling on the ground, but into a bottomless hole The hole that resembled the one of one of the chief shades
“It seemed like a dream, I just tumbled down; my thoughts became swirls of memories and dreams. I felt nothing anymore, no pain, no warmth, just a deep sensation of being dumped into a pool of icy cold water. Whispers swirled around me I closed my eyes, wishing ”
Is it finished?
Where is everyone?
Am I Dead?
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So you see? That was very short! So I’ll include this part witch gives a brief introduction on the next chapter…
—Real Life—
Note: Alex stands out as I in this part, but Sonia still recounts her story. When a paragraph is in total italic, the I stands for Sonia. Lets move on to the story!
Wait, you mean you tumbled down a huge hole, with your memories swirling around you, and you somehow you got out and walked to my house half dead, half alive, looking like a zombie, telling me your adventure. Do you expect I really believe that
I said sarcastically. Brother, I know it is incredulous what I recounted; but its true, I am not delirious. Sonia replied sincerely. How would I know
you disappear for 3 years then suddenly appear on my doorstep. How is this possible! And
where is mom and dad?
I glanced at Sonias face, it darkened even more.
She started talking in a low voice, her face faced the ground. I cannot say if theyre alive or not, all I know is that theyre in mortal danger First let me finish my story, and I hope its not my last I turned around to see Jack peacefully snoring near the fire, his head dangling from his neck, bubbles popping as he snored with equal force to a typhoon, “And he says I’m a heavy sleeper… sigh” I cursed under my breath. It looked like he was in deep dreams so I asked: Go on sis, we have all night
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Sniff, I couldnt think of anything else . . . maybe I should stop writing. ._.
But whatever if you guys liked it I could always come up with something that will have more action! XD
And a new preview to another series, The Lord of the Moon.
It was inspired by a good author in Ireland. And it talks about detectives mixed up with MS.
*On a type-writer, if you can imagine it*
My name is Moon. Fletcher Moon. And Imma private detective. =/
I spent already 12 years on this spinning ball we call “Earth” while 90% of it is filled with water. =/
And during those years, I saw a lot of things normal people NEVER see.
I saw lunch boxes of proud maplers being stripped of all it’s food execpt the vegetables and fruits(mushroom spores, etc). >:o
I saw trucks of halloween candies been taken away from cute little babies. >:o
And I saw people with green blubber dangling from there nosies. >:[
I thought I saw everything.
Or so i believed.
It seemed I was wrong.
Very wrong.
I saw… the Hackers.
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Lol, guys what do you think? Should it go on? XD
And remember to click the I like it button! XD Thanks to all. -.-” I ain’t so good, I know.
And ALL comments or flames should be welcome. I wanna improve TT_TT
Shoot, there are LOTs of mistakes dammit.
Wait correcting them. . .
Lol, people with green blubber dangling from their noses >:o
Kids these days. . .
Wow, amzing how some people write and some can’t
I’m part of the can’t group TT_TT
Some more mistakes.
He looked at me in a confusing way.
How about: ‘He looked at me, confused’? I mean, if someone looked at you in a confusing way, you are the one confused, not him.
And sounds/whatever else can only resonate in something or someone. ‘Resonating . . . out’ sounds weird. :X
, dont get it,
lolz you write better then me :X im just to lazy to think x]
this one is goooooooood
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