What Lies Beneath Nothing. Chp. III

This is really short guys and girls. But it introduces some important elements to the story.
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Now! On with the story!

From the memories of Sonia

The servant, who actually looked like a chief bandit even though he was dressed in a tuxedo, but I saw a shining dragon’s tail on his belt and a nimble wrist guard on the other side. He looked at me in a confusing way, he opened his mouth and said something, but all I heard was a sudden piercing scream that resonated around my head. Exactly the one like I heard when the Shades were being attacked. He muttered something else, but I couldn’t hear, screams continued resonating in and out my ears. He looked at me with a surprised look, then, without warning he casted a dark shadow and took off, running down the corridor.

I tried to follow him and his large shadow, copying his every move, but I was once again stopped by another howl. I covered my ears and remembered my main purpose: to find my parents (and my brother). I remembered that the servant mentioned how they were living somewhere around the building. So I gave up chasing the guy and wandered on the opposite direction, searching for the presence of them.

But as I stumbled through the long, golden corridor, more screams followed. Somehow, I found the will to go on. I wanted dearly to find my family, my source of warmth. But something happened… sort of like … I can’t remember. I think it was an explosion that was actually IN my head, I don’t remember falling on the ground, but into a bottomless hole… The hole that resembled the one of one of the chief shades…

“It seemed like a dream, I just tumbled down; my thoughts became swirls of memories and dreams. I felt nothing anymore, no pain, no warmth, just a deep sensation of being dumped into a pool of icy cold water. Whispers swirled around me… I closed my eyes, wishing…”

Is it finished?

Where is everyone?

Am I… Dead?

So you see? That was very short! So I’ll include this part witch gives a brief introduction on the next chapter…

—Real Life—

Note: Alex stands out as I in this part, but Sonia still recounts her story. When a paragraph is in total italic, the I stands for Sonia. Let’s move on to the story!

“Wait, you mean you tumbled down a huge hole, with your memories swirling around you, and you somehow you got out and walked to my house half dead, half alive, looking like a zombie, telling me your adventure. Do you expect I really believe that…” I said sarcastically. “Brother, I know it is incredulous what I recounted; but it’s true, I am not delirious.” Sonia replied sincerely. “How would I know… you disappear for 3 years then suddenly appear on my doorstep. How is this possible! And… where is mom and dad?”
I glanced at Sonia’s face, it darkened even more.

She started talking in a low voice, her face faced the ground. “I cannot say if they’re alive or not, all I know is that they’re in mortal danger… First let me finish my story, and I hope it’s not my last…” I turned around to see Jack peacefully snoring near the fire, his head dangling from his neck, bubbles popping as he snored with equal force to a typhoon, “And he says I’m a heavy sleeper… sigh” I cursed under my breath. It looked like he was in deep dreams so I asked: “Go on sis, we have all night…”

Sniff, I couldn’t think of anything else . . . maybe I should stop writing. ._.
But whatever if you guys liked it I could always come up with something that will have more action! XD

And a new preview to another series, The Lord of the Moon.
It was inspired by a good author in Ireland. And it talks about detectives mixed up with MS.

*On a type-writer, if you can imagine it*

My name is Moon. Fletcher Moon. And Imma private detective. =/
I spent already 12 years on this spinning ball we call “Earth” while 90% of it is filled with water. =/
And during those years, I saw a lot of things normal people NEVER see.

I saw lunch boxes of proud maplers being stripped of all it’s food execpt the vegetables and fruits(mushroom spores, etc). >:o
I saw trucks of halloween candies been taken away from cute little babies. >:o
And I saw people with green blubber dangling from there nosies. >:[

I thought I saw everything.

Or so i believed.

It seemed I was wrong.

Very wrong.

I saw… the Hackers.

Lol, guys what do you think? Should it go on? XD

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And ALL comments or flames should be welcome. I wanna improve TT_TT

7 thoughts on “What Lies Beneath Nothing. Chp. III”

  1. Wow, amzing how some people write and some can’t

    I’m part of the can’t group TT_TT

  2. Some more mistakes.
    He looked at me in a confusing way.
    How about: ‘He looked at me, confused’? I mean, if someone looked at you in a confusing way, you are the one confused, not him.

    And sounds/whatever else can only resonate in something or someone. ‘Resonating . . . out’ sounds weird. :X

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