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Let it end
A prod, another poke, a rasp of breath, I couldn’t open my eyes; I didn’t want to open my eyes. *Small Flashback* “MOM! NO!” I screamed. I saw tall shadows carrying my mother away. I was casting teeny energy bolts at the dark ghosts from the Legion. It was no use. My mother seemed to be crying, since she was a cleric, she couldn’t do anything to defend herself. *Sudden End*
A few more, now quick, jabs at my upper arm. “Mmmh, lemme go…oo (pronounced Goooo but fainter).
*Continued from last flashback* I stopped my efforts to stop the shades, and turned around. Only to see my father, face to the ground, a pool of blood surrounding him. Dark shadows advanced on me… This was madness. They were at least 7 feet tall. They loomed over me, and I saw no more.*End*
A punch landed directly on my arm. “OUCH!” I awoke from my slumber, looking directly in the face of my sister. It looked… it didn’t look like when she was 3. Her cute face then, I remembered her smile, her bright blue eyes, her laughter that escaped from her crimson lips. It cheered me up greatly. Even though she was just 3, her vocabulary was advanced. She always knew what to say when one needs comforting. But it seems all that changed, her eyes were now a dull gray, her face scarred and bruised.
“My God, what did they do to you…” She was quite scared to talk to me but replied in a small, raspy voice: “I should start from the beginning, it started on that night, when mother was being attacked by the shades, I was actually by her side but something happened, something that changed everything… Let me start from that day, that one single night, that 1 hour, where we lost it all…”
I was being carried by our Mom; I saw a bag dangling along her, full of our stuff. She was slowing down with every step she took, every breath she breathed. When we arrived at the outskirts of the village, you were there too, we were then stopped by shades. Mom and I took a path, you and dad took another. What precisely happened to you, I’ll never know, but I can recount my experience.
As the shades blocked us, our mom started healing herself. She was already tired but she kept on healing, hoping to inflict damage to those half ghosts/ half men.
I was now wobbling by her side, trembling in fear. I looked up in one of those shades’s face. What I then saw terrified me, there were 2 glowing eyes with a shade of yellow, but there was something else, the most disturbing of all. There was a huge …hole… in the middle of his forehead. And it seemed that it swallowed everything that approached it within a mere few inches. I could see bugs that were desperately trying to get away from “it”, without success.
They towered over us, and my mother’s efforts to protect us filed in vain. She started crying, falling to the ground, and snapping her Cromi, her prized possesion. Me, I only had a small hunter’s bow to protect myself with. And not a single arrow to aid me. I thought that we were doomed and our lives would be over in an instant, but suddenly, all the shades turned around screaming their heads off. It was so ever piercing; I covered my ears, writhing in pain. A holy light descended on us, and I saw a person using a powerful magic attack, whatever it is called, I don’t know. But it was a giant angel appearing above his head, striking the shades with a holy ray. I was awed. But before I could give my thanks to the particular person for protecting us, I fainted.
Somehow the next day, I woke up on a huge fancy bed, in a huge fancy room. Everything was so… bright! I walked outside my room, tip-toeing around. It seemed that I was in a mansion. A servant suddenly ran by me, I halted him by blocking his path. I asked where was my family, for that was all I could think of.
He replied sincerely, but sadly: “Our master discovered you last night on the road. He told us to take care of you and your parents” I was shocked and quickly asked again: “What about my brother?” The servant looked confused and said: “He never mentioned another kid apart from you…” “No… that’s impossible!”
What happened?
Please let all this be a dream
Please…
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Kingdom of Hearts.
marie. YOU made these blogs?!?! i read them like over and over but I NEVER KNEW IT TWAS UUUUUU =OO
btw, can i make u a char in my bloggy? =O TELL ME SOON! just comment it like on my blogs or soemthing, U MUST HURRY! =OO
er, btw,
♥ tomo ^-^
o_0″ Who’s Marie. . .
Lol, for real who’s Marie >.<“
You got me confused.
And is this really good? -.-“
SORRY! ahhaa, wrong, place, ^^:; im, sorry, ahaa, ^^;; uh, i-i’ll go o_O
‘s okay. At least there’s paragraphing and all. Though I thought the ‘*small flashback* *end*’ bits a little distracting, since they break the flow of the story. Imagine a river, then suddenly there’s a little stone in the middle of nowhere. Yup.
Ok, I’ll correct that. But it’s supposed to be like it. The guy has a sudden flashback- but gets interrupted. He enters the trance again continuing his previous memory.
It’s quite simple, just follow the idea?. . . XD
I corrected all minor mistakes. Should be good enough now! More comprehensible >.<
^^, I didn’t read and don’t feel like to, But I will
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😀 😀 😀 I started reading and couldn’t stop x_x; your a GREAT writer! 😀
oooooooooo i luvb this blog its so good wit all the flash backs n all the action n stoof ^.^
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