Trying again…

Author’s note: Well since the Apocalypse wasn’t too appreciated and I worked a little to much for that series I thought it would be better if I started a new one… I’ll start with an Intro on the characters. There are also mini pictures of them. ^_^
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Raikou, the Vader
Impossible is nothing for Raikou. A professional assasin, even so at the age of 48 he can run like the wind, bend it like Beckham, and do most things a 12 year old child can do. His weapons never fail him, neither his intelligence. His face will make anyone tremble at the sight of him. He has very good leadership skills and is a never-hesitator. (Is that how you spell that?)

Ria, the Huntress
For he every monster isn’t just an ordinary monster, it’s a target for on of her arrows. Although only in her 20s, she endured through many hardships. Losing her parents at the hand of the legion of 101 councilors at the age of 6, she stared to train almost crazily trying to be the number one huntress. Constantly in a bad mood she only has 3 friends very close ones.

Sora, the Purificator
Don’t let the name fool you. It may seem that Sora is a weakling’s name but at the age of 16 his force is quite astonishing. A HyperBody spearman that’s always wielding his LionHeart, he usually hops around helping people in distress. With a smile constantly floating on his face, he is one of the rare friends of Ria.

Jack, take That!
A born fighter to the bone; He’s always trying to face new enemies. He mastered the arts of swordsery at the age of 23, and he’s faster than a leopard and strikes harder than a tiger. He isn’t very intelligent though, and neither very romantic. Also he’s a secret lover of Ria.

Saunia, the Priestess
With the skill matching with those of many men priests, she knows the art of healing and types of medicines better than normal priests. Very rich and popular, her best friends are Ria, Sora, Jack. The 4 of them together can take down any target, almost.

Seer, the All Knowing
Once a great sorcerer and king of a distant kingdom, he was overthrown by the legion of 101 councilors. Thirsty for revenge, he shrouded in darkness and started to practice the dark arts. Constantly planning to ban the legion from the once his kingdom, permanently.
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Hey guys, should I make a story with these characters?..
Leave all comments if you think the chracters are stupid or ok.

Here’s a taste of the prologue.

The Book of Prophecies written by Tarroka Terrace:

On Maple Island, in the town of Amherst and South Perry, at exactly 8 o’clock, four children will then be born, four different destinies, four different ways, one common enemy. They will be named Sora Lockheart, Ria Serene, Jack Wellington, and Saunia Brown. Along their adventure they’ll meet and join forces with Raikou. Along the way they’ll find that Seer wants the same thing as them: revenge for the deaths of Ria’s parents and for Seer’s downfall. A hard battle will then occur and it will be so destructive that divine forces will interfere. But at that I don’t know… it is up to these four to decide for their own future…

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“Get Up!” a voice yelled, “Huh?” mumbled Sora; it was quite early for a wake up call. Outside the Sun just started to rise above the thin horizon. “But mom! It’s still dark outside! Why did you call me at this hour!” … “I’m not your mom Sora. She’s already dead, at my hands.”
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Dum Dum Duum. Ok, should I continue or should I just STOP right now? Any feed-back or comments are useful!!
Please don’t hesitate to write something. Thanks!

6 thoughts on “Trying again…”

  1. ages are lvls? o_O
    “Raikou, the Vader
    Impossible is nothing for Raikou. At the age of 68 he is close for starting his third job as a professional assassin.”

  2. Oh dam, I shouldn’t have done that. Ah well. Anyways

    I’m completely forgetting about the stories I have school and it’s too complicated to fit writing in my schedule. And I don’t seem very good at it.

    ~David~

  3. Age by Level isnt good. lol, then Tiger is 158 years old xD

    And Suuushi is 150 Years old.

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