Hello, this is my first try at a story blog. Try not to say Boo all the time, even though it may be very tempting to some people. ^_^
[Well, I borrowed some names from people in the game so I’m sorry if the people in the Story feel offended in any way. But I just can’t think of putting my name in the story. Honestly… BurningLeage. -.- just thinking about it gives me the creeps.]
A faint rustling… a howl from a distance… whispers through the dark moonless night… Ciso walked along a deserted road in the Henesys Park. A Sai (3 forked dagger) and a Slain encrusted with blue jewels rested on his dark belt, ready to be used. After a while he got bored and hasted himself and off he ran through the trees. At last he spotted his target, Mr.Lee. It was rumored that Lee was the sole guardian of the legendary “Zakum” hat, which was said to make the wearer invincible. Ciso scoffed “How is someone this weak supposed to guard something that precious… this would be trying to steal candy from a baby!” The aged assassin crept slowly toward the banker who was snoring peacefully on a surfboard. Ciso whipped out his Sai, moving in for the kill. As he loomed over Lee’s blank face an explosion struck behind this back blowing him off his feet. 20 feet further Ciso landed in a pile of Dog pee (When will pet trainers ever learn…)
Who made the explosion?
Ciso got up and emptied a bottle of pure water on his face. There was smoke everywhere but in the distance he spotted a shadow approaching, slowly. Ciso quickly put his Slain on and threw a pair of Tobis at the shade. In return he got 2 arrows that whizzed by cutting of two strands of Ciso’s dark hair. “Ooh, I’m pissed now!” he shouted. Sadly he slipped on a apple that rolled out of his bag and tumbled behind a statue. When he got up the smoke had disappeared leaving only a solid body 5 feet away from Ciso. A long golden arrow was pointed directly at his nose… no wait. Make that a arrow with the tip like a bomb…
Kind of random plot, but you’re pretty good at describing situations. 😀 keep up the good work!
Lol, very random this is just a test. please list some comments people.
hmm not bad, good start
Wow that’s really good 😀 I like how you decribed Mr. Lee.
And thank you for your tears T-T haha ^^
so detailed.
3 thumbs up! 😀
detailed, o.o””’it’s like, english thesaurus right there XD, very very detailed, i luved your use of words ^^ looking forward for your next entry
Soryy im very new at this. : (
omgosh amazing a peice of art ur great