Love Story Review Part I

[For those of you that watched love story on you tube should probably know what it is like. And you should’ve remarked that the author never continued to the 4th part. I will try to continue but I’m not sure if I can think the same way as he does. Very well you are warned. I AM NOT TAKING ANYTHING FROM THE AUTHOR. He is merely too lazy to make the 4th one. No offense.]

A review of Love Story part I

A little boy named Isaac lived in the small village in ElNath. He was a reject, why? For he had this terrible red nose that everyone detested. He plays alone around town, eating his lunches in silence… in the bathroom, where no one can bother him with names…
As the years go by, Isaac grows older but his nose remains… as a curse that was set when he was born. To be continued…

A review of Love Story part II (modified)

Isaac is now tired of the village he lives in. He decides to move on, to a new world, to meet new people, to live new adventures. And even more, to find this so-called-rumored feeling that wears the name ‘Love’. He arrives at an old airship port; he steps on the creaking floor-boards. He can hear the waves splashing on the sandy shores. Crabs scuttled around in the shallow water. With a heavy FLUMP the ship departed…. Isaac finds that he is the only one traveling on the ship. After a long journey Isaac arrives at his destination…
He leaves the Station and enters a whole new realm. The first thing Isaac sees are towering trees with houses placed around them. He wanders around hoping to see someone, but the city remains as quiet as a puddle of water. On a sign-post near a grocery store, he read: New! Come to the sun-set city named Kerning City and meet the Dark-Lord! He has created a new event and need participants! Come if you dare, and challengers beware! Isaac feels that he’s up to it, so he decides to pack up and travel to this so called Sun-set City… He enters the grocery store and there he purchased 100 white funny looking bottles and 100 funny looking blue bottles all full of clear liquid. He buys a huge bag to carry all the bottles with him, and starts his great journey. What will Isaac face?

Uh… I have to put the review of 3 on another page cuz it’s sort of long… Sorry about all the details…

2 thoughts on “Love Story Review Part I”

  1. well even if it is taking from the author as in your taking the dudes or main characters name and rephrasing it in the same way yuo are just writing a fanfic of this lovestory but ill give you kudos fro the time

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