As me and my gf were walking to mushmom we kill some iron hogs but when we arrived my gf had little health right when i was about to give here pots. then mushmom came knowing that i had to protects here grave i killed her then as i watched illbis droped i didnt pick it up knowing money or anything in the world couldn’t take away the pain that i felt that day then someone comes and takes it knowing theis i didnt care then she said her finnal words”leave without me” then i said “no i cant leave without u i love u anything in the world cant break us apart”.Then when i was about to suicide she said”ill be back” i belived her knowing that u can revive(to bad the illbis was taken by my friend)then when i saw her my friend who took the illbis said”shere” and droped it and i take it buy when i got the illbis back she was right in front of me and that made me the luckiest guy in the world i didnt care right now if i could have all the money in the game all i wanted was my gf and nothing els(other then my friends).
The End
from ChaosEnergy
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~Mip