Ok People, I think the View thing got weird.. So I’m just putting it back into a normal story format .. So Yeah.. ENjoy.. Hopefully. And seriously people
post I’m starting to think my writing is bad. It’ll get better soon.
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Lily and Takusa were training in the fields of Amherst, simply enjoying eachother’s presence. LEVEL UP!! … ANOTHER LVL UP!!
“Wow, we both lvled at the same time… What do you think of that?” said Lily.
“Huge coincedence but anyways I think its time for me to go to Victoria,” said Takusa quietly.
“Im going too then!” shouted Lily very loudly.
Other beginners around stared at Lily and Takusa.They wondered in amazement what was the problem. However one of those beginners who were in the crowd
had the name of Gary. This may not matter now, but trust me. It will later.
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Takusa ran towards his house, while Lily went to hers. They had agreed to take the ride tomorrow after saying goodbye to their parents.
When Takusa arrived at his house, he knocked on the door. To his surprise, no one had opened the door. Takusa began to get suspicious, his mom was always here around noon
cooking lunch for him. He ruffled around in his nooby inventory and brought out a key. He opened the door and took a step inside. There was no smell of food. Takusa
began to get worried. He caught sight of a white paper on the table. He opened it and it read.
Hello son. As you know this is a letter from your mother.
I have gone to a far place too look for your father.
I know you are strong enough, so I’m not worried about you living alone.
However I am very worried about your father.
Please look after yourself. And remember to go to Victoria when you feel
it is right. Good bye.
Love,
Your Mom
Takusa couldn’t believe it. He pinched himself, but he was still in the kitchen. Takusa was crushed. He had no one to say good bye too.
“Well, I better get a move on,” Takusa moaned. He packed his things and went to his room and slept.
Lily had arrived at her house. When she entered, she quickly shouted.
“Mother, father?” Lily shouted.
“Yes , Lily?” the couple asked her daughter as they walked into the room.
“I think it is time for me to go to Victoria Island..” Lily slowly said.
“Aww , our own daughter going to Victoria Island.” Lily’s father said proudly.
Lily’s mother was a different story though.She began to cry with no avail. Endless tear drops falling from her face. Still she was proud just like her husband.
“Well honey pack up your stuff, the boat ride is like a day long,” Lily’s mom sobbed.
“Yes, mom,”Lily said. Lily began to feel guilty. She began to pack up and her mom handed her food.
“Thanks, mom” Lily said. After that Lily went to sleep and couldn’t wait for tomorrow. Tomorrow was her big day.
TO BE CONTINUED..I THINK.. MAYBE..
No seriusly been like, how long? NO COMMMENTS WTTFF Am i that bad?
i think its good =D
don’t think you write bad, you write good = ) Think positive and trust me, you write quite good = )