Me ane my Friends were walking down Maple Island. I(Jason) was a cleric.My friend Brian was a Crossbowman.My friend Anje was a Ice Wziard.My friend Michelle(Mich) was a Fire Wizard.My friend Richmont was a Sin(Assassin).My friend Adam was a Page.My friend Trevor(Trev) was a Bandit.And my friend Matt was a Spearman.
We were exploring and we meet new people.We met hot,beautiful Rain;We met grumpy,old Marco;and we met young,smart Lucy.
We met Cpt.Shanks and he said “Want to travel to a new land?Meet new people?Meet new friends?Well come to Victoria Island.But theres a few only 150mesos for each person.”
They were shocked because they only had enough for 4 people.So they chose Anje and Mich to go yet couldnt decide who else.The last ship was going to leave until the next 3 days.So they chose and they picked Richmont to go and Jason.They said there goodbyes and tried to raise money.
Anje,Mich,Richmont,and Jason made it to Lith Harbor where they met Jane,Chef,and many more but bad people.
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O.o you might want to paragraph this O.o anyways add more details, like their eye color or hairstyle or something O.o like tell us how they look like so that we have an image of the person your discribing, im not telling you to stop with your personality descriptions, but along the way, make the character develope, change their emotions, and stuff O.o not that im a pro, but just saying =D and btw i’ll look for your story later (ur second part i mean) OH OH OH WAIT i got something else XD, when u write your numbers, it would be better (in my view) if you wrote them out like three instead of 3 so that it doesnt stand out TOO much =D
~Paragraphing and Spelling are Gods~
Woah Woah Woah Smidiot
I’m supposed to be the one doing that but oh well. *Runs Away* and *goes to school* <<<Ha! HA!
~David~