This one’s kind of short. Sorry. I only spent 30 minutes on this one. I’ll give this a 6/10 myself. It’s not true though. Lol, made up. but here it is!
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Don’t you hate it when people call you names
Thinking their the boss, think it’s just a game?
Wondering why you get treated differently
You treat other people with respect and always act kindly
Why do people stereotype me?
Is that the way fate left it for me to be?
Maybe I deserve it all
Maybe I deserve more
What’s wrong with everyone
Are there anyone out there just like me, Anyone?
You just want to shout out “Leave me alone”
But will they? no.
You have been deceived, betrayed again
As your feel better, yet the scars o yesterday remains
What is this got to be your life?
You just feel like grabbing your kitchen knife.
After all of this, you won’t give up
You think it’s funny every time I fall on my butt
All I wanted was a friend
Fine, Treat me poorly then.
That was good ^^
Kool
I always like poems. Even funny ones! ^_^
Their, They’re, and There, remember to look at these carefully before you type them.
Hmm, not bad. I’d also give it a 6/10, only because the beginning about stereo-typing didn’t really fit in with the ending about being clumsy(?). Pretty much all I have to say, keep on writing.
~Sono
“Are their anyone out there just like me, Anyone?”
That would be “is there” not “are their” right?
wow thats, touching
very good, keep writing poems 😉
keep up the good work!