I KNOW Im suppose to be sleeping. I’ve just locked my doors. I wanted to post this Poem. =)
It’s really cool even though it’s nothing about maple since i made this poem ages ago.
Okay, here it goes.
I hate you, I hate you so much!
You told me youloved me, such and such.
You have already broken my heart.
You took it, you just tore it apart.
You left some great wounds that will never heal.
I won’t change my mind, that’s how i feel.
I really had loved, I really had.
Now i feel bad, worse than sad.
All those times we were together, if it means crap to you.
Just have to tell you i won’t love you too.
Today as I leave you’ll soon realise it’s your loss.
You won’t feel like your the boss.
If i was the thing that was holding you back.
Well, I must say Im sorry for that.
Fly away, fly away forever.
Real shame we can’t be together.
Last words I’ve got say.
Grab every chance that comes your way.
Now i must leave, my time is up.
I thought i hated you that much.
I close my eyes and you fade away slowly
My tears slid down my face rapidly.
YOU’VE CHANGED, YOU’VE CHANGED AS MUCH AS CAN BE.
but maybe, maybe it was just me.
(>T.T)>~[I LOVED IT]~<(T.T<)
Im really glad you like it. My first piece of work ever on MMO Tales and first person to like it is “sicboy23401”!
lol. Am i over reacting?
That was a good poem! I even used 2 lines for my personal message on msn x3
‘*EverydayHero*’
I like this a lot ^^
Im glad you all liked it. I spent alot of time on it anyways. ><
Looks like my hard work didn’t go to waste!
By the way, out of interest EveryDayHero, what two lines did you use?
This is very cute. out of interest, where do you live? (not the address, hehe the country.= P)
Thank you for commenting on mine also. ^_^
huh? map1eholic, Do I know you? I don’t think i read your blogs. or did I. . .?
map1eholic and angelwitwing are the same person. I am both. ^_^
it’s a long story. lol
oh! lol. i get it. =)
You write really cool stories, sadly i can only write poems. Really weird.
im guessing your girlfriend or boyfriend left u b4 u wrote this huh
Nice poem, could use a few tweaks in the spelling/grammar department but who am I to complain? XD My english is terrible sometimes.
Anyway I really empathise with you/the poem narrator.
OMG THIS ROX SO MUCH! YOU ARE A GREAT POT!1111!
You are a great pot? Geez. . .
It was a very well written poem. I enjoyed it 😀
nice. . . excellent. great
I used the lines:
Last words I’ve got say.
Grab every chance that comes your way.
Sorry for not replying, I went to bed >_>
‘*EverydayHero*’
OMG i loved this