A girl… yes, a young girl… sprawled on the ground… two boys beside her… also knocked out… a huge monster… a girl screaming loudly…
“HELP!!! CIARA! MARINE! SIN! HELP ME!!!” it was Pie’s voice, full of hopelessness. Sin rose to his feet, strugling to stand properly. Marine was next, as in much pain as his brother. Isoon cam to, in much worse condition than the others, the balrog had knocked our most powerful attacks back at us with the most simple swipe. A sudden flsh back came to me…warmth, heat, a wonderful, cozy little hut in the middle of the forest… my home… suddenly, a monster came out from the forest, an identicle to the balrog we were now facing. Suddenly I realized, this wasnt a flash back…. IT WAS HAPPENING!!! Soon the whole Victoria Island would be talken over….
“Marine! Sin! Hit the monster’s claws, it’s weaker there and he’ll drop Pie!” It took alot of energy to say that one sentence though,I wondered why.
“Drop dead and rot in Hell you gruesom little Bactard!” Sin screamed as he threw his last star at the balrog.
The balrog dropped Pie and flew away. “We have to leave for Orbis NOW!” I said to my tired comrads, “Victoria Island is full of these balrogs. “We have to warn our families!” Marine said in a tired yet impatient voice. “It’s too late, I had a vision, I saw my house, attacked…destroyed… the same has probably happened to all of yours”
So we headed to Ellenia, we had alot of trouble on the taxi, everyone was fleeing to Ellenia.On the way, I saw so many villages, forests, all burned down to the ground. When we finally made it onto the boat, I slept for hours. Then, the boat was attacked. And this wasnt your normal attack… It wsnt normal Crimson Balrogs, not one of the fakes destroying Victoria… This time, we were attacked by somethign worse, my own brother…………………….
lol pie, xD
i didnt bother reading it the vocabulary sucks you spelled ellinia wrong temery!
lol pie i give it a 5/10
lol, i didnt have time to be discriptive, swimming practise, last trip to the beach, and ellenia (lol) alotta ppl speel it wrong,
when you have no time to be descriptive, then just dont write, there isnt a point really.